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Another bad naurto fanfic why do you people do this to naurto why do you hate it

Good read.

Kind of overdone and generic but still well written, despite hating the Star Wars crap.

Well done second chapter.

Excellently done first chapter, very well written.

This is even better! I love that Naruto not only gets a family, but he gets the power to turn into hybrid monsters! I love this new story already.! Family, girls, armors, power, and monsters.
I’m really looking forward to seeing how this new story goes. Hope it comes soon.
Have a happy new year!

Not going to lie the old version where Naruto had the crystal arm ando the armors sounds better. Mainly because it was Naruto combating the monsters through skill rather than powers.

Rewrite looks good so far. Cant wait for the rest

looks interesting cant wait

you got me excited!

A world where only women can harness chakra? That sounds like an awful world to be in. I would happily nuke that world to the ground.

Better dead than be a woman's slave. Fuck women.

No Problem evreone starts on the Beginner line.
So far good writing

ok neo i will read when it comes out btw safi male beta armor when a weapon was out the first thing the popped into my head was i was looking at a edge lord styled dragon knight armor mixed with a bit of batman when i looked at its cape

Ok. Keep us posted