Wow, I love it. How Bill is becoming nicer and Dipper is talking about his issues. I can't wait to see more. Thank you for the great chapter.

This chapter was amazing, the story is gaining tempo and I can't wait to see how it all turns out. Thank you for the chapter

update soon Pleaseeeee!

Yess u tell them, by the way this fanfic is amazing!

I’m sorry that some guest called you bad names. I love your books, and I want to support you. Not many people realize how hard it is to get ideas for chapters or storylines. That is one of the things that I think people should realize, including why people shouldn’t rush other people in making a book or animation, for they are regular people too, and sometimes need a break. ...Well... This was long...

Sometimes I just don't understand people, don't mind him and I hope you will continue after your break.
To hell with haters ;)

Oh no. Wtf. I didn't know that happened to you. I'm glad you decided to fight back and gave other respectful readers a chance to read your stories. But if you ever decided to make your own site, then we'll support you. That calling name thing happened to me one time as well but i paid it no mind since i think my content provoked them (and i feel i was partly at fault) at ao3 but i still wish it wasn't a guest review so i won't think it's a troll. I'm really sorry that u experienced that kind of things and much worse. As a fellow human being, i'm ashamed that other people do bad things to each other. I hope you feel well soon and thank you for the stories you have graciously blessed upon us.
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Oh my word, why do people do these things and ruin everything?! People are down right horrible sometimes (Not you writer, the commenter)

Good on you for reporting that bully. I’m sorry you keep getting crap from people like that you really are a good writer and don’t deserve that bs.

I love this chapter, first contact between Bill and Dipper, I can't wait for their first lesson.

Aaaaa, I can't wait for them to start properly interacting with eachother. Nice chapter, I'm waiting for more. Keep up, your work is amazing and all the happenings keep me waiting for more.

Please give a date for the next chapter pleasssssseeeee

Excuse me, when will there be an update?

I consumed previous parts in 2 days and it's only getting better, I can't wait for more. Thank you for your work and I'm holding onto promise that this will have a happy ending from 1st part ;)

Ok so I have not read the first part and I'm regretting it because I already read the second part so now I'm a little scared if I will start doubting the story all together if I read the first part the reason I didn't read the first part s that I saw the video trailer for the second part and once I started reading I couldn't stop! I really love this story and the plot especially but I'm gonna risk it and read the first part so pray that I won't start to doubt the storyline and where it goes.