This is and was an amazing journey. Thank you for writing and for sharing!

Words cannot describe how masterfully written this is. I absolutely love this AU-definitely one of the best I've ever read. Your writing is engaging, your characters (especially the ones from canon) are fresh and insightful, and the relationships were amazing (Obi and Bali!). Thank you for sharing this brilliant piece of fiction.

This has been such an incredibly moving series. I've been clutching the edge of my seat the entire time. I love Anakin's final redemption. I love the relationship between Bali and Obi-Wan. There's a part of me that hoped that Bali would find out about his parentage, but at the same time it doesn't matter. Because whatever the case, Obi-Wan is Bali's father. I love the ending and I'm so happy that Bali's apprentice is Leia. I have so much more I would love to say, but I'm finding myself too emotional to write it out. This was a gorgeous and luscious story that I started reading because I wanted some Obi-Wan hurt!fic and instead I got incredible world building and the beautiful relationship between Obi-Wan and Bali.
Thank you for writing this!

This is absolutely one of the best alternate universe stories I have read here. Your original character development is wonderful as are the alternate lives of the known characters. You have a wonderfully colorful imagination that you skillfully bring to your writing. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Oh my god.
This is absolutely beautiful!

I wanna say more, but, I'm kinda at a loss for words. I remember reading the first part of this series decades ago, but I'm certain I never finished it. To find it again, to read the first to third and last from start to finish, it was an experience. To be brief, I really think the characters were incredibly well realized. I loved the different turn in relationships that took place, heartbreaking as most were, and the path this series took was really unexpected. Got me in tears and stuff. Anyway, fantastic story. I really enjoyed reading all of it.

Wow. This was an emotional rollercoaster. I'm feeling a bit too shell shocked to write a proper review - forgive me? But it's an excellently crafted story. Thank you for writing and sharing.

I meant to say this two stories ago, but Anakin is such a creep. He was probably always an obsessive creep, but while I've read fics on how he can be sweet and nice he definitely has these creep properties. And potential abuser thoughts about keeping his wife 'safe' in one area without the job she loves just to take care of their 'kids'. And I also really like how you portray Jinn as an asshole without ever saying it outright; people's reactions and his own thoughts are enough that I wanted to slap him several times. Hard. And Bali and Halle were so well written that I even checked the wiki page if they existed! Is Bali Obi-wan's child? I really enjoy this series, and I'll have you know I've lost a lot of sleep over this!

I have now read the entire series and I know its been a long while since you wrote these stories but they are amazing. thank you for writing them. I hope you are doing well.

I'd read this years ago on The Jedi Council Forums and loved it. Just finished reading all three books again.

Such a terrific story. Probably the best Obi-Wan story I've read. Love Bali. It was just as that he never discovered that his beloved Master was his father.

This was one of the best fan fictions I've ever read.
Your plot was better than the original plot.

Nice, a lot of writing, and most of it quality.

The only thing that stands out to me is the amount of formality.

This entire trilogy is beautiful. I've been reading it non-stop. I love Bali, and my heart has broken for Obi-Wan and Halla and Padmé and Bant and everyone who has suffered. More then anything I love how real it is, how there is happy and sad and everything has a consequence of some sort. Undoubtably one of my favorite stories. I'm glad it ended peacefully.

Amazing trilogy. I very much enjoyed it. There were a couple of typos but that did not diminish from the story and they were few and far between unlike most fanfictions. You successfully caused me to sympathize with Obi-wan in a way that few authors do. I will say that I cried after I finished the trilogy and was so emotionally invested that I could not even pull away to do homework. Thank you, it was an amazing plot and I only started guessing about Bali during the second story and even that was shaky logic at best. Thank you.

Wow, just... wow...
This was beautiful. Poor Obi-Wan suffered so much, but he had so many things to make up for it. His apprentice, for a big one. His master DID finally apologize, and show his pride even if Obi-Wan was too hurt to acknowledge it very well. And I could go on and on, but mainly... wow...