like always ozpin ruin everything again

Look don't give us a tag picture like that with Jaune and Blake, if your just going make this dam Arkos, it's very misleading.

Eh you did really great with this chapter.

I look forward for the next updates!

more great chapters please

Ozpin the fucking idiot he could have done that after he killed cinder

Oh that's a good chapter. I see that you linked Dracula and his myth to this story are you going to link any of the others as well like the Wolfman or somehow Frankenstein's monster still survived

Oh Fuck the Hell Yes!

And Ozpin succesfully f*cked up the one chance to have Cinder killed before she did any more damage. Now he's going to pay for it with his life if the little beatdown from Jaune hadn't weakened Cinder too much.

Now we all are at least 98% sure Jaune will give in and drink blood. The real question is, WHO's blood will he drink to become a full fledged Nosferatu? A random White Fang grunt's? Adam's? Cinder's on top of Beacon's tower? Or Pyrrha's (either by her willingly offering it, or ... not willingly)?

Keep up the good work.

Beatiful display of emotion, you truly showed how much Pyrrha cares for Jaune. But a 'simple' vampire more terryfing than Salem? Sorry, but i'm not buying it, unless Ozpin is scared mostly by the speed Jaune could create other vampires.

I’m guessing Pyrrha still does but this time in frount of the young Dracula pushing him over the edge and causing him to feed in an attempt to save her but ultimately failing. If you go into the whole Oscar Is ozpin that could give him a legitimate reason and excuse to be angry and act out.

good god, I knew Jaune would be broken strong by RWBY standards after becoming a Vampire, but damn I didn't think he'd just shit stomp her like that. then again, that is only A FOURTH of however much power Ozpin split into the Maidens and the fact that Cinder didn't have the full Maidens abilities to train with in the first place and I'm extremely excited to see what you decided to bring in future chapters of this series.

Ah, so close.

Kind of hoping the cover ends up happening though. It ain't a vampire story without drinking from hot girls.

This fucking gross and unexpected.

IT'S ABOUT MOTHERFUCKING TIME!

Ozpin...you fool do you have any idea what you have done?! You just threw away the only chance to kill the bitch! And now you will pay the ultimate price by releasing a monster hell bent on vengeance for not killing the bitch who will kill his love! But anyways great chapter can't wait for the next chapter update.