i just finished reading this whole story so and this is my fav story in all of fanfic, so ima leave like detailed reviews for the important characters

I know this is completed and all. But even if I have a bit of a trouble to follow what happens at times, I gotta say that I really enjoy what you've made so far into the story! And I became really happy when you stated that Izuku and Uraraka isn't becoming a pairing! I don't like those togheter for many reasons, so that's a big relief.

Nice work!

Sincerely/ Dennis. S.

So is midoriya gay for tokoyami or is it the other way around?

The bijuu from naruto

I stopped at chapter 20, it really is much too long, the meaning drained and diluted more and more with every installment. Cant be arsed to finish it.

You know, this is 600000 words long. Lovecraftian horror stories work, among other reasons, because they are short.

Amazing story! I koved it from start to finish! I loved every bit of reference and lore you gave, and marveled with the novella-quality you wrote. I find myself commiting to the mistake of finding a hero in Izuku for the sake of finding enchantment in the angst. But this kind of bitter-sweet ending is more than appropiate. Thank you for the story.

I'm going to start with a thank you.
Thank you for this story, this story held so much depth and created realistic characters moreso then the actual mange/anime.
This story was so well written and every detail was noted, this was truly a masterpiece. This story has brought me to tears more then I'd care to admit. I know I am still not mature enough to most likely fully understand this, and I look forward to a point in time when I will read this again and understand. But for now this story has been an amazing work of art which fully embodies the supernatural and managed to make a crazy powerful 'quirks' but still left the weaknessess shine through. I love this story, and probably will cry later on when the fact that everyone died fully hits me. But for now: Thank you for this book and I look forward to fully appreciate it in ways I cannot now.

I love how literally almosr every spelling of 'Masaru' is wrong.

this just keeps getting better and better

im not even half way through... this story is complicated and fucked five ways from Sunday... but I can't stop reading.

This story is not the only one of its kind but it employs a lot of different concepts that no other has ever explored. Great job on this dude. This is most definitely one of the best works on this site.

oh man. this has been a roller coaster ride from start to finish. there is so much I want to say about this story and the paths everyone walked. far too much to be summed up in a single review. I'll start by apologizing. I found this story nearly 2 years ago and gave up on chapter 1 due to the somewhat awkward writing style. by chance, I came across it again and decided to try something new. I've read 100's of stories but this is the first one I used as an audio book and it really added a lot of depth to this story. I've been putting it on in the background while working 12 hour days throughout the corona virus. I actually finished the main story about 2 weeks ago and slowed down a bit on the epilogue to give myself time to reflect on everything that happened. this story was great from start to finish. I've seen a couple bad attempts to make Izuku a villain that just strip away his actual personality. Your Izuku was true to his character but had so much more character development and challenges throughout his life that it's no wonder he came out as he did. I particularly enjoyed his time with One for all, reinforcing his convictions and challenging some of his preconceived notions of Heroes and how they fit into society. Izuku grew so much after that, and the story just kept getting better. By the end of that saga, the seeds of the bloody peacemaker had been sewn. that's not even touching on fumikages story or the epic creation that was the imperial. family and all the history you created for them.
speaking of Fumikage and the chains of the soul you created for him, it really reminded me of Persona 5. I found so many parallels between it and your story that I started a new game and named my character Mikumo. both have the main characters delving into the abyss. your abyss was more divinity and darkness vs the concept of human emotions creating a warped world. also the chains connecting your companions together and empowering them felt so much like Fumikages chains. but I'm not here to talk about a game. I'm here for your epic of a story and I should get back on track. the hardest death for me was Ochako's. I don't know exactly what it was, but your Uraraka was great. she had so much energy, and so much sass. her and Shinso seemed to really be going somewhere. Izuku never even found out about Ochako until after Shinsou died too and by then he already had too much to deal with. it also really hurt to see what you did to Aizawa. I understand why it happened, considering the man Izukus father was, but it was painful to see him torn apart in such a way. God, there's so much more I want to say but I'm going to cut this off soon. the last thing I'll add is that I found a fitting theme song for Kirishima and his rebellion. Obey by Heartist. mainly the chorus. "sing with me, and fight the demons, masquerading in the cloth of bishops"

Oh. Oh that's why he's not in the same place when he dies, and that's why things keep breaking.

He turns into an abomination between lives.

Awesome!

My God. Izuku is a moron and its frustrating. I barely have the resolve to read further. The only thing that still anchors me to this story is worldbuilding. This fanfiction is like a fucking patience exercise. lol.