Never thought I'd get my daily dose of angst in just that wonderfully short amount of words yet still feel great pain.

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?

Also, I like the way you used the second person. I didn't know that a POV like that could have a powerful impact if used in a way like you did. I usually encounter this on interactive stories and such; thus, I have a fixed perspective for this kind of POV but you changed that. That's great.

You are also awesome at descriptions. I love the way you described Prussia. Like, damn, creatively AGONISING. I don't need to say much to express the ache in my heart.

I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY NOW.

Ahh this is so sad but so good! I really love the second person, and the decision not to use speech marks - it gives it a very stream-of-consciousness feel and makes it extra powerful!