dude, that reviewer was just stupid. i’m enjoying the fic immensely, i would never have guessed that it wasn’t your style!

I don't normally write reviews but I felt the need to for this. Sorry it gets a bit long.

First of all, I'm so happy I finally found someone who can express just how tragic Cassandra's life was in the myths (none of my friends are interested in mythology and the only one that does just sympathized and pitied her). And poor baby Izuku going through that? i'm devastated.

On the other hand, while I do not agree with how you portrayed Katsuki (I wish he could have just a bit of remorse and that his actions were simply an act of uncontrollable rage), I felt it was rather clever of you to have him as Ajax the Lesser and Shinso as Athena (and now I can't get Shinso's sleep deprived self popping out of Zeus' forehead (maybe Zeus could be Nezu lmao))

Lastly, as a fellow writer and (self-proclaimed) veteran reader, I have to point out that your writing of Izuku's anxiety made me really dizzy and confused of how all over the place it is. Which is good, honestly! You were able to portray something that is really difficult to 'show not tellat least imo) in writing.

Welp, now you know why I don't write reviews. They're always too long. Honestly, I'm practically Izuku when he goes into his muttering mode by how much i have to say. But anyway, I just really wanted to say that I really really like this story (and made me cry a few times) and hope you update it soon (is it just me or did you just imply YOTTT is coming to an end soon?) because I wanna know what happens next. Oh but please keep safe. Idk if your country's affected greatly but Corona virus has put my country into a nationwide lockdown for safety. i hope you're well and none of people you know are affected. Please update soon!

Please tell me that this isn't over... This story has so much potential. I really want to see the relationship between Shinsou and Midoriya develop more. What would Night Eye do after finding out about Midoriya? Do they stop what happens at USJ? Does either he or Shinsou transfer to the Hero Course? So many unanswered questions! I hope you find a way to continue this awesome story... but if not I really did enjoy everything that was written.

Please change the genre of this story. It is listed as Gen, Drama but clearly it is Angst, Hurt/Comfort.

This was interesting even if it was heavy on the angst , are you planning on rewriting it or something?

Sounds like Izuku could learn more than strategy from Sir Nighteye.

This story may just be an experiment, but I quite like it. The idea that a quirk would refuse it's possessor the ability to admit its very existence is original and has me quite intrigued. I hope you pick up this story again.

Interesting parallels. It's a cool idea. The writing around Bakugo's entrance is a little choppy, but I suspect you did that on purpose to make the scene more jarring. Right?

One thing I was wondering. Why did Shinso invite Deku to lunch when he showed that he wanted nothing to do with Midoriya earlier? It seemed very random.

I really like this story. Im hoping you might add more to it, there's so much more that can happen from here. Please think about it

Straight up, this is stupid. All of it. A shit ton of angst, a shit ton of “waaaaah, I can’t do anything because reasons”, and with how you made the quirk and people act rather than react, this story is shit. I can’t bring myself to even read chapter 3 or more. It sucks.

Didn't want yer story being taken down since I was enjoying it. Was thrown at first since it was k but once I ignored the rating, the story itself is really good. Absolutely love and hate that Izuku's quirk won't let him or others who know he has it talk about it. It flows well and I really enjoy the character interactions, and dialogue. Keep up the great work, no matter where you upload it.

Well, I can only hope you choose to continue somehow because I can't call that an ending. It's not. I refuse to accept it.

More seriously, I do like the concept and I think it deserves more. That doesn't feel like an ending, that felt like a cliffhanger. It really could use a better wrap-up.

Also, pretty sure that one reviewer is probably one of the only people who actually cares about the rating, sooo... *shrug*

Great story

Amazing work so far! :D

Huh. That’s a weird spin on foresight