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A dragon? A shitty dragon, to whom Naruto has no connection whatsoever? WHY?!

Please continue this story.

It's good so far can't wait for the next chapter

Hmm, so Naruto is trying to find out who Hawk Moth is and I wonder what Naruto's backstory is, anyways keep up the great work!

great

I like it and all, but I still need to give some thoughts.

I feel like giving Naruto a Dragon Miraculous, I’m not saying it’s “the”, because it’s not, is a bit questionable. Reasons being and this is spoiler for anyone who doesn’t know.

A) All Kwami have double letters in their name. Tikki, Plagg, Wayzz, Nooroo, Trixx, Pollen, Duusu, Longg. It’s kind of a running theme for them. Not to mention that the Miraculous is a beaded choker with the activation call being “Bring the Storm” and the deactivation being Open Sky.

B) Longg is the Kwami of Weather and gives the user the power to use abilities of water, air and lightning transforming into one of the three elements they chose just by saying water, air or lightning dragon. After all three elements have been used Longg loses energy giving the wearer five minutes until they transform back.

C) The one that uses this Miraculous is Kagami. I’ve yet to see the reason why, but regardless it would mean taking away her becoming what could potentially be an important hero. In the end, I’m sure all of the heroes will come together to fight Hawk Moth.

Now, I’m not sure what the other powers of the Miraculouses are, only half of them. But, a better idea would have been Naruto gets transported into this world, but in the process, Kurama is separated from him and turned into a Kwami unlike any of the original ones.

If you want more info on this idea, PM me. Heck, you might see something amazing from this idea.

Hmm, not a bad chapter. I'm guessing Naruto made up the Uncle part and is actually living by himself...unless he does have an uncle whose gonna pop up later.

Granted, I'm a little bent out of shape that your Kawami is different from the one in the show, though since you wrote this before he was revealed that's perfectly excusable. Though I think you might have overdone it with his powers as I always thought the Ladybug and Cat Miraculous were supposed to be the most powerful of the bunch, hence their placement in the Miracle Box. Essentially giving Ryu the power to rewrite reality seems a little excessive.

However, having Naruto serve as basically the voice of reason and dare I say, voice of the audience isn't a bad thing. I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to scream at the screen for some boneheaded move one of the characters have made, mostly Marinette, and how such a thing could be resolved if the parties think for a few seconds about it.

More curious to see what happens with pairings, to which I could see Naruto end up with Kagami or maybe Juleka, or if you really wanna push the envelop have him become a mentor to Chloe and teach her to become a better hero and person. I could easily see Naruto or Ryu being willing to give Chloe a chance where Marinette didn't while also helping her become a better person overall. Be intriguing to say the least.

Curious to see how things progress.

Cool 2 chapters continue please.

Please Naruto x Juleka

i like the story please update again

This is good keep going and keep up the good work

I am looking forward to chapter 2 and this need to be M rated story.

Can we get more of this? It may have 1 chapter but I can tell it can be really good