Reviews for Darkness Before the Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I so hope you continue this story. |
![]() ![]() Pensez-vous pouvoir terminer cette fanfic prochainement do you think you can finish this fanfic soon |
![]() ![]() bonjour J'adore cette histoire. C'est très bien écrit. Allez-vous continuer? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story and I am in love! Cant wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() Thank you posting. I just finished the series and wish there were more intimate moments between them in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really good fic, mate! :-) |
![]() ![]() I love your stories. |
![]() ![]() Oh, has actualizado, qué bien, muchas gracias Me ha gustado el capítulo, aunque si he de ser sincera no me gusta que Lisbon le haga comparar lo que sentía por Angela y lo que siente por ella, no es algo muy maduro, muestra mucha inseguridad y en cierto modo es insensible con el dolor de él. Pienso que si alguna vez hablan de eso debería ser él el que saque la conversación. Es mi opinión y sin ninguna intención de ofender, estoy muy agradecida de quetú nos regales tu trabajo y tu tiempo. Pero estoy muy contenta de que Lisbon y Jane por fin estén hablando abiertamente ¡ya era hora! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an honest and important conversation for them to have. Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! Realistic reaction on Jane’s part. Thank goodness, he chose to fight his fears and embrace love and Lisbon. Don’t think Lisbon could have withstood him running away physically or figuratively once more! |
![]() ![]() Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This covered a great swath of necessary realizations. They needed to acknowledge to themselves what they felt and would risk to go forward. As importantly, they needed to voice that aloud to each other. Numerous stories present Lisbon's many virtues. I appreciate you also laying out Jane's. She'd have to feel like that to turn away from the safe, normal (if boring and ordinary) possible future with Pike to go forward with Jane. You did leave out Jane's genius. Of course IQ isn't the be all to love. But his ability to help her further the law-enforcement to which she devoted her life is no small thing. His talents were the Red Dawn start of their relationship/partnership. That work gradually revealed the good man obscured by a dishonorable upbringing and past. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! They definitely needed to have this conversation, given their history. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad you’re continuing with this Looking forward to the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very sweet (and necessary) conversation. Thanks |