Reviews for His Girl Friday |
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marigold123 chapter 1 . 5/31 I enjoyed your story! I was very upset with the attitude of the Greys toward Steele/Rose/Ana. So kudos for the emotional roller coaster. I enjoyed the deprama and romance. I like how you tied it jump in the end with the Epi. Thank you for writing. |
PaulaAlbarracin chapter 1 . 4/25 Hermosa historia! |
canadianclaire chapter 1 . 4/24 What an amazing story! Super creative and heartfelt! Thank you for sharing |
Kim972 chapter 1 . 2/25 Another one again. Love those stories makes me think must check the doctor more often |
Cl1ff0rd chapter 1 . 2/12 Loved this story, couldn’t put it down |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20 A lovely story. I would have enjoyed a bit more of the family after the marriage. Thanks for sharing..Denie' |
NikkiG26 chapter 1 . 9/12/2019 Very cute story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 Even better second time around. Thanks for sharing! Denie' |
SMEADE chapter 1 . 8/10/2019 Great story loved the different Ana/Rose enjoyed all the ups and downs in Ana/Christian’s relationship but most of all love the happy ending. |
CLHB chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 Good story! Thank you |
Madison Girl chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 Loved this story! I am on a roll and it's the second story authored by you I have read. Now on to the next! |
Ipscott chapter 1 . 5/20/2019 Like the story. Bad that Ana had sad upbringing then top it off with losing an organ and not able to carry her kids. Thanks for posting a complete story. |
camillehenley3 chapter 1 . 5/15/2019 This was just so beautiful and yet so sad... |
Linda Dockery chapter 1 . 5/14/2019 Oh my goodness what an amazing story when I started this last night I couldn't put it down I fell asleep around 3am with my glasses on an my tablet on chest when I woke up. Anyway when I started this I thought oh my what has this girl got going on with this story it was so funny at the start especially when Ana ran in an saved Christian from desperately destroying the rest of his office and talking to him holding up her hand to stall him he just stood there stunned. Like who the hell is this douty little woman . Wow you are an amazing author love your imagination. I laughed so hard in some of this dialog that I was sure I was going to wake the house up but they didn't budge. Lol Loved where you had Steele as her cousin Rose I figured it out don't know really how but I did I was just thinking when she told him about her model cousin it would be her loved the gala and don't get me started on Rose deliberately stepping on Elena's foot that was beyond brilliant. Christian figured out it was Steele by her scent how sweet but damn she wasn't kidding when she told him she was Steele at work made a believer out of him Steele/Ana figured out what Elena was to Christian smart girl and saved him without him knowing at first. Glad that he came clean with his parents but still hard to believe his family didn't believe him over that bitch just because she and momma Grace were friends so sad Oh m lord they got married yes yes yes so happy for them. Nope don't blame them for not inviting the family not one bit Oh my God I almost went into panic mode when the dr told Christian to that there was nothing else they could do for her . Woman you had me wanting to throw my tablet at the wall. Then realize that it was a bad dream a very bad dream Was happy when the family showed up I know Christian needed them but damn they should have been there for him before all this happened with Ana. I still can't believe that they would believe the pedophile and especially when she said Ana was a dommie and ruling Christian for BDSM...really Ana but you know she did tell him what to do and offer her advice but a dominant no way..lol Any how so happy for them even though they couldn't have kids on their they have twins with the help of surrogacy Elliot almost lost his lady got her back Mia life turnedbfor the better with her man and business Yeah she's gonna have another wedding for Ana and Christian Love this so much hated to see it end Sorry so long review but I had a lot to say waiting to read more of your stories Thank you for sharing |
Mlee777 chapter 1 . 3/22/2019 Thank you. This story is entertaining...I'm racing though it. Your writing is fast paced and filled with life. From the1st word in this story, I haven't stop laughing. . You have taken Christian and Ana characters and made them your own. Nothing but their name belong to EL James. Again...Thank you, this story is a joy to read. |