Reviews for Cream
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8
nice
linkjames24 chapter 1 . 7/8
This was cute, with Weiss and Ruby and Jaune, and adorable with the progression of the story and erotic with the threesome ending. Nice!
WolfePlays chapter 1 . 4/30
My, oh my. that's some creative use of jaunes semblance.
anthonyapodaca63 chapter 1 . 4/24
lol
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18
Lol the ending was just perfect.
FadilShameer chapter 1 . 2/6
Hahahhahhahahahahhahahaha!
axel100 chapter 1 . 1/31
So Ruby. How many licks did it take to get to the cream filling?
B1ackAshes chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
Wow... I did not see that coming

Outstanding story as usual. It was damn well written, had a pretty good premise, some funny moments, and a very naughty ending. All in all, you did a great job here.

That said, I'd definitely love to see an M-rated version of this story...
Snappy Flowah chapter 1 . 10/28/2019
Poor Yang.

Lucky Jaune.

But even luckier are Ruby and Weiss.

Also Blake MVP. Hooray for euphemisms.

~Snappy~
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2019
Any Possible Continuation of this story? Maybe Yang Finding out, or even, Pyrrha Getting a taste?
Lurker chapter 1 . 6/9/2019
This...did not go the way I had thought it would but I'm completely fine with the result even if my brain is say Wut! right now
OnceHopeful chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
This story is amazing
Chafus chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
Well...
Firm0426 chapter 1 . 5/13/2019
That escalated quickly... not that it was bad, it was great in all honesty; I just... Wow...
ThatWierdGuyWhoReadsForFun chapter 1 . 4/6/2019
Oh my.
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