Reviews for Cream |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/8 nice |
linkjames24 chapter 1 . 7/8 This was cute, with Weiss and Ruby and Jaune, and adorable with the progression of the story and erotic with the threesome ending. Nice! |
WolfePlays chapter 1 . 4/30 My, oh my. that's some creative use of jaunes semblance. |
anthonyapodaca63 chapter 1 . 4/24 lol |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18 Lol the ending was just perfect. |
FadilShameer chapter 1 . 2/6 Hahahhahhahahahahhahahaha! |
axel100 chapter 1 . 1/31 So Ruby. How many licks did it take to get to the cream filling? |
B1ackAshes chapter 1 . 12/3/2019 Wow... I did not see that coming Outstanding story as usual. It was damn well written, had a pretty good premise, some funny moments, and a very naughty ending. All in all, you did a great job here. That said, I'd definitely love to see an M-rated version of this story... |
Snappy Flowah chapter 1 . 10/28/2019 Poor Yang. Lucky Jaune. But even luckier are Ruby and Weiss. Also Blake MVP. Hooray for euphemisms. ~Snappy~ |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2019 Any Possible Continuation of this story? Maybe Yang Finding out, or even, Pyrrha Getting a taste? |
Lurker chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 This...did not go the way I had thought it would but I'm completely fine with the result even if my brain is say Wut! right now |
OnceHopeful chapter 1 . 5/21/2019 This story is amazing |
Chafus chapter 1 . 5/21/2019 Well... |
Firm0426 chapter 1 . 5/13/2019 That escalated quickly... not that it was bad, it was great in all honesty; I just... Wow... |
ThatWierdGuyWhoReadsForFun chapter 1 . 4/6/2019 Oh my. |