Reviews for Naruto: Dai Shi |
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Currahee506 chapter 7 . 4/28 More please |
Slightly Annoyed chapter 6 . 3/3 Wow, this is getting real, really quick. I see where you two are going with this I think, but still, why couldn't it have been Sakura, or tenten who's parents were the jack rabbits. You know, it doesn't really matter, this is your story, but from someone who loves reading a good Naruto/power ranger story, you won't find many good ones with an OC on the good guys side taking up so much 'screen time.' Not saying take your character out, because she does seem hella cool, but maybe tone her involvement down a bit. Also, if you don't believe me, do a check like I do for stories. Ctrl F, then type in your OCs name, and you'll see what I mean. |
Possibly Annoyed chapter 5 . 3/3 Is this Einjeru going to be a main? Is she going to be dating RJ? Just wondering because there was a lot of her in this chapter, and it kind of made me wonder how much of an impact she will have on the story as I personally don't want to see an OC overshadow the main cast. Just a thought. |
Rio Skyron chapter 7 . 10/21/2019 Nice chapter |
Einjeru Hatake chapter 7 . 10/21/2019 I am evil aren't I? *chuckles* On a more serious note, I enjoy being able to help the story along and am excited to see where I can help take it from here. |
bob19h chapter 7 . 10/20/2019 i have the feeling next chapter has naruto going dragon on some soon to be sorry person. |
tl34lt12 chapter 6 . 7/31/2019 So when are we gonna get the ranger forms? And have the kids lampshade the look, posing, colors and spandex |
AlienTokusatsuDuelistMangaGeek chapter 5 . 1/27/2019 Hey there. I am AlienTokusatsuDuelistMangaGeek and while I respect your choice of Ayame, I personally see Hana as a possible Best Match for RJ, especially since she has three Ninken by her side and Wolves and Dogs are basically the same. It could be interesting to see how they interact. Be sure to give me a response in a Private Message whenever. |
bob19h chapter 5 . 1/27/2019 here's a stupid yet funny idea. one time does the"i call to the spirit inside" thing kurama makes the sound of a train and rams full speed into someone/thing. |
tl34lt12 chapter 4 . 1/1/2019 Naruto Fox Spirit Sasuke Hawk Spirit Sakura Otter, Swan or Hippo spirit Hinata Panther or blackcat spirit I want to see their ranger forms soon |
DeGamer422 chapter 4 . 12/16/2018 Yeah aren’t tomatoes Sasukes favorite food. |
WolkaiserDrake chapter 4 . 12/11/2018 not bad, but it just feels a bit slow |
SPark681 chapter 4 . 11/29/2018 So, Kakashi has offically passed away and Anko/RJ are the new sensei's anyways keep up the great work! |
Einjeru Hatake chapter 4 . 11/28/2018 Although, I shouldn't review since I'm now co-authoring, I thought I'd at least put a self introduction for those just joining. I hope to make updates a little more frequent on top of my personal stories and the other stories I'm co-authoring and life. Either way, ja ne |
Thunderfoot Crossheart chapter 3 . 11/16/2018 Damn all of the feels |