Well I never thought I would say this again but all know I am really glad you updated I can't wait to see more. And don't worry long as there's an update I'll be there to read it.

Ah! I love Drake so much, such a great character!
I wonder what it is that they’re looking for. I liked the parts with the booby traps. He sure showed Ice Queen that she’s not always the smartest in the room, haha!
Also, very interesting chat between Ironwood and good old Sully. The army huh, interesting background. And he apparently saw something, know Atlas did something dirty and now demands to know what.
Thanks for the update, loved the chapter!

Please continue this story.

Have some faith Sully!

-Dutch Van Der Le

The Meta? Nice

That part in the AN where you said you didn’t want to make him younger just to ‘fit in’ made my day.

Love this story, can't wait for him.

Naybe his semblance gives him good luck fhag turns into bad luck

never clicked on something so fast :D Anyway great update, even if it's a little short and I like the detail you put into Nate's traversal of the rocks. The jab he took at Winter's choice of foot wear was also a nice touch. Speaking of their interactions, I found it organic considering their clashing personalitioes and previous encounters. Organic and quite entertaining XD I like how you introduced your own kind of grimm, and liked how they seemed to have their own strengths and weaknesses, I can tell you put some time into creating the 'slinkers'.

As for the puzzle, it started out feeling very much like a typical Uncharted puzzles, before turning around and giving off a more Indiana Jones feel at the end. You know with the rushing Waters returnings and closing door mirroring something like the 'crushing room' from temple of doom. And in my opinion that just makes it all the better, differentiating between the kind of dangerous they'll have to face as no treasure hunt would comeplete with race against time death traps XD

And lastly, have no fear we understand it can be hard to get to work sometimes. Writing can be hard and even draining sometimes so if you need to take time off and recharge, we will understand :D Anyway i hope you start feeling better and find your drive again soon. See next time and keep up the good work.

Will Nathan's villains will make a appearance and have a bigger role in the story?

Um... Why does this chapter not have any line spacing? Like, at all?

Keep up the good work with this fic.

I have an idea for Nate's semblance, if you're still looking for one. While Awsome Dude's various luck-based ideas would probably work, I would like to suggest a different direction; Nate's climbing abilities. Given how much the games focus on this, it seems only natural to me.

I have two ideas for this;
1: When it comes to handholds, Nate can instantly tell whether or not he can get a secure grip on it, or if it can hold his weight.
2: Nate has some kind of Spiderman-esque ability, but severely downplayed, to the point where it basically only serves to give him a slightly better grip while climbing.

Of course, it's your story, so there's absolutely no pressure to choose any of these options, I just thought it might be a good idea to share my opinions.

Oh, and good story, by the way

First of all, like this story. You have the characters down pretty well. Looking forward to the next update.
Anyways, I had a thought I wanted to share. You said you were having trouble thinking of Nathan's semblance and got good luck suggested. What if it was a sort of inverse of it. It would explain why he always manages to get out of those situations, yet at the same time keeps on getting into those situations. Perhaps channeling it could have the chance of increasing his luck and/or making the situation even worse.

This is the first time I've ever Followed a story before reading through all the current chapters. Take that as a VERY good sign, and keep me impressed. I might just end up making this story a Favorite of mine