Also my mental image of tomi is like 'Pretty boy by junjo ito' when he had the wig

Also I don't think that the story should have the main focus on the love story and she may turn to serve the kingdom as a thank to them (perhaps arranged matrimony idk) since you personified to specific kyoko more determined, still pure but no longer naive, then if it follows chronologically it would be interesting the approach in specific the character of Natsu.

That's supposed to be that Kyoko and Kuon are supposed to be together in all narratives thanks to fate but you can't rule out tomi x kyoko when from the beginning he turns her into someone worthy to be by his side (I also don't know if it was on purpose but kuon buy her under the real name of tomi "kyoko is mine") and she seems to be the only one who accepts him sincerely so that it takes a dened for this platonic relationship To make it more realistic if you want seguin with KyK.
with the characteristics of the character of tomi the only way to release it is that kuon is more worthy than he is and that the union is not counterproductive in addition to the drama that may the death (as you said death is already like seem debility). personally i stan todd and his hana in this narrative world cause of the drama and edginess.
Also i think you describe so Much the environment in each paragraph, I can not give you a constructive review cause I do not know the theoretical in narrative so sad but your story remains cool.

Waiting for the next book please post soon love your work

Please update

Please update p.s hope your keeping yourself safe

When will you be posting its been a while

Please update when is kyoko going home and what is kuon feeling for her and what does this other creep have planned so many ? and you've all the answers well be safe in this stressful time n keep ya love one's close

Please post an update

Please update soon

I'm so in love with this story. When will book 2 be out? I have to say really impressed with the twists and turns of the story.. awesome job

Really really looking forward to the up coming chapters please tell us you didn't forget us. I'm excited for the romantic relationship between the 2 how will kyoko deal with the new closeness sure she'll freak out first but then again she some what accepted him in some ways and I'm sure his mind is in a gravitational pull towards her well can hardly hold on to my sanity any more it's getting really hard but as I'm reminded good things come to those who wait though it's hard waiting for good story post very hard keep up the good work can't wait to hear from you with your next sequence of chapter post's keep up the good work

Hope you'll be able to post soon

This was amazing! I’m hooked and can’t wait for the next book. I love everything about this.

Ok I'm excited for this to happen I was anxious about the new work n was hoping to see what was new any way real fan of you work keep growing I'm loving it excited