Great start! I've been a huge fan of these sorts of stories ever since Captain Dragon especially whenever Yang has a central role. I hope that there'll be more soon.

Are you gonna continue this?

excited to see where this goes!

Interesting, looking forward for more!
Also, ignore the guests reviews. They're not worth it.

Well, I guess I'll keep an eye on this alongside Captain Dragon. I hope this becomes a great fic. Also, don't listen to the guests who are being assholes. They're just hating on a good fic that has barely started yet.

You fucking pece of shit go fucking die in a hole and take this shit with you

Ugh. That other one ist going to be jaune, right? Well, bye then.

Looks interesting.
I guess we all now know why the police in vale was all but useless.
Keep up the good work.

Ahhhhh cmon man Yang was going to be a cool boss. Anyway great chapter.

Yay it’s like Starsky and hutch I loved watching that show as a kid with my Gramps and the movie was fun, Just with starsky ending up with hutch in a make female version.

Ooo...while I’m sad the sisters will get split up, this seems like a good setup so far. I look forward to more!

I like this idea for a story please continue