Funny

THIS IS EVERYTHING I WANTED! When dipper started singing, I immediately paused and went to find the original video so I could have it play in the background as I read on! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Ur amazing! It was well written and just about how I imagined it myself

A girl from my music class was singing. I recognized the lyrics from the "sweet submissive subject" part

Well done. Little bit of humor here and there. You also captured the character's personalities accurately too.