Very interesting. I'm not so sure of the kids taking down those in the Order. Sad.

ahhhh i love it so much! at first i didnt really think it was for me but it warmed up to me and i am so excited to read the next!

when is it coming out? i have been waiting for ages and it still hasn't come.

THE BEST

THIS IS THE BEST BOOK EVER.

I. LOVED. THIS. CHAPTER.

Love it! I'll be starting part 3 later as its 5 in the morning and I need some sleep..lol

Since you changed the whole story. I wonder what the ending is going to be.

I am glad Neville , Seamus and Dean all told Ron off. It is about time. How is Hermione going to be lying to everyone about who she was, when she didn't even know who she really was?

Well done Voldemort...well done you deserve a round of applause *applause*

They are so lucky getting to live in New Zealand.

I don't think that Harry would be so happy to live with Voldemort. He might have been happy to see Hermione though.

This story keeps me wondering if Harry has joined sides with Voldemort, what is the order going to do?

Harry should have asked if Hermione and her father just helped him to get away from the order. Right now I don't think ether the dark or the so called light side are going to just him.

So I’ll be honest, the story’s not accurate really what so ever. I don’t mean the plot line, of course it’s different. But the characters personalities don’t exactly match the original profiles of the characters. Like it’s not believable that this is in the potter world. Honestly I do like the plot line, which is why I’m continuing. It just isn’t really with the characters that are named. Also, you should find someone who can proof read, but not only are there quite a few spelling mistakes, there are a lot of issues with the grammar and sentence structure. I can kind of read past it but it’s hard for a lot to get past that. Just some suggestions to help out. Not in any way dissing on the story as a story. It’s just not what I expected. I like where your minds at though