Reviews for At The Bottom Of The Swimming Pool
Hopelessro chapter 32 . 7/25
Iv just read this all in like one sitting! I loved every bit of it! We need an update ASAP! I can never find any decent Baz fanfics yours is perrrrfect! X
strippedraw chapter 25 . 10/1/2019
Seriously living for your updates. I loved how Jessica was trying to prove a point with this chapter and pushing Baz back. As much as I love them together, I think this might be good. And her letting Pope help her gets me right in the feels. Hoping that Smurf's push with the pills doesn't send her spiraling out of control again.
Guest chapter 24 . 9/9/2019
Please hurry back.
strippedraw chapter 24 . 8/23/2019
Honestly, im not sure why this doesnt have more reviews. This story is AMAZING! Loved the new update, Jess is finally home! Can't wait until the next to find out how she is holding up being back, after everything. And Smurf...god. I have no words for how she treats Jess.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/7/2019
WOW! Man that Was w crazy chapter. Hurry back soon. I can’t wait to see what happens
evfangirl98 chapter 22 . 7/1/2019
Love it
strippedraw chapter 22 . 6/18/2019
Wow. That was incredibly intense. Poor Jessica, the torture that she is going through is just awful. Her pleading with Smurf and Baz got to me. Could be enough to send Baz over the edge to come out with everything and get his girl. :)
evfangirl98 chapter 21 . 6/5/2019
Love it
strippedraw chapter 20 . 5/10/2019
Such an intense chapter! I hope that the boys rally and find the girls and that J is okay!
strippedraw chapter 18 . 4/8/2019
Absolutely loving this! I literally have been reading this all day, havent been able to put it down. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
JI Bollywood Princess 131 chapter 9 . 7/29/2018
I love how you state J is quickly becoming the favorite because it’s so true, I think that’s why Baz resented J near the end.

You described the characters and relationships within the family perfectly, especially Pope with his guilt!

I get how Jessica feels. I don’t always get due praise, either. Oooo, Smurf calling Baz out! I love it. Smurf really is a manipulative b*tch.

Hahaha oh Craig, who can resist the call of pie? I remember my mom commenting on how Smurf’s pies came out so huge. What a dick Baz was when he threw it in the trash!

Baz and Jessica certainly had some tension. I love how he’s always getting on Craig’s ass about doing coke! Ooo, I loved that showdown. Baz standing up for his woman. Work it, boy.

Smurf is absolutely a C word. No doubt about it. Very manipulative.

Please update soon, I love your work!
JI Bollywood Princess 131 chapter 8 . 7/23/2018
Craig, you don’t understand. No girl REALLY wants to be thrown in a pool with her clothes on! Hehe.

That was some intensity between Craig and Jessica for sure!

Ooo, Jessica and Baz getting down n dirty! That was seriously hot. The tension!

Aww, poor J. The burden of such a big secret!

Please update soon!
JI Bollywood Princess 131 chapter 7 . 6/29/2018
Hahaha! That was too funny when Baz shoved her in the pool! Lol I’m glad Deran came out to Jessica, the interaction was smooth. I also enjoyed Jessica and Nicky bonding, that was great! Please update soon :)
JI Bollywood Princess 131 chapter 6 . 6/26/2018
Yay, another chapter! Sorry it took me so long to review, had a lot of chores today.

I have a high tolerance to pain and gross factors, but it made me cringe when I saw the boys stapling J’s leg on the show. I think it’s awesome that Jessica is a career woman! She’s already way better than the rest and she’s a strong woman! You go, girl!

It was nice seeing her interact with J more, he really is a sweet kid. Love the tension between her and Baz!

Please update again soon! You rock!
JI Bollywood Princess 131 chapter 5 . 6/14/2018
Jessica and Baz did the dirty? Wooo! Get it, girl. He is super fine. Just delicious. Unfortunately, my homeboy Pope is right. It might not have been the best move to sleep with the smoking hot Baz.

Wow! Great comeback, Jessica! Pope is for sure creepy but I do believe he has a good heart.

I love how you’re working in the church heist! Very well done. Please update soon! :)
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