Reviews for Untouchable
Guest chapter 2 . 7/21
Great so far! What will third year be if not about sirius? Also is this going to be a harry/daphne fic? Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Packer82 chapter 2 . 4/26
Love it! Thx for another amazing chapter! Thx for sharing your talent and all your hard work in sharing your story! Hope more comes soon!Thank you the effort during these trying times. Take care of yourself.
SolarSolstice chapter 2 . 4/22
Standard trope fest: SuperAbusive!Dursleys, Indy!Harry, helpful goblins, easy potion repair for damaged bones and scarred skin, Sirius gets released from prison/cares for Harry, Ron-bashing, Manipulative Dumbledore, Potters have a will, Noble and Ancient Houses, 11-year-old masterminds...the list goes on.
Solangelo5 chapter 2 . 4/21
Please show more of harry and sirius' relationship. I also want to see how harry deals with ron's attempts at friendship.
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 2 . 8/24/2019
1/10 gem bluka su
Smokeing chapter 2 . 7/21/2019
Very good story I hope you pick it up and finish
Charlie0925 chapter 2 . 6/10/2019
Truly awesome writing here honey! I am LOVING THIS BRILLIANT FIC and hope to read more soon! ;o)
Pennieyoung chapter 2 . 2/24/2019
I like this story very much. Looking forward to the reading more:)
anarion87 chapter 2 . 2/4/2019
nice story so far
fhippogriff chapter 2 . 12/8/2018
Very interesting. I like the fact that Sirius had to hang back and not smoother Harry. And Harry didn't get everything he wanted (who cast the Fidelius).
JD4320 chapter 2 . 11/20/2018
this is a very good story so far. really hope you continue it soon as well as your other one
kaftan chapter 2 . 10/16/2018
I think I like this almost as much as Charon. Hope you’ll continue with this whenever you have time and inspiration.
Kinda curious why he would go to Hogwarts tho... he hasn’t met any of his friends so why would he walk into enemy territory voluntarily? If I were him I’d rather choose Canadian or American magic school but that would make a whole different kind of story(or not a story at all) I guess :-)
MeinGimli chapter 2 . 8/24/2018
Good beginning. I always love it when Dumbles doesnt get his way.
I hope you come back to this soon.
Saissa chapter 2 . 8/7/2018
This was a great start. I do hope that this story is continued.
jbfritz chapter 2 . 7/20/2018
Great start! Please post more soon!
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