Reviews for Till the Dawn Breaks
Caver Floyd chapter 3 . 6/25
This is so good. That means it is even more of a shame that there are only three chapters. I love the idea of a female Jon going to the Citadel. And of course, Sarella is my favorite "dornishman". I hope you will consider continuing this at some point.
ISwearI'MINOCCENT chapter 1 . 5/28
I just wanted to let you know that I love this story and I really hope you decided to continue it! It's really amazing and I hope you consider it!
ty. alexandra chapter 1 . 5/21
godd this one has insane potential as well
lovenightshade03 chapter 3 . 1/23
This was hilarious! Gosh, poor Arthur though jejejejej I really do wonder what he wanted to speak with Lyarra about ;) And hope to find out in the next chapter!
Good luck with your writing, can’t wait to see what happens next :3
Kat chapter 1 . 3/11/2019
Are you not writing stories anymore?
thehungrian chapter 3 . 1/14/2019
Is there any chance that you’ll come back to this story? It’s unique, well-written and I’m genuinely excited about it. Please update it 3
Dovish Meister chapter 3 . 12/22/2018
Please continue. This is good.
FirstThaumaturgy chapter 3 . 12/12/2018
That authors note at the end... Hahaha
Carol542 chapter 3 . 11/11/2018
Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it
belladu57 chapter 3 . 7/10/2018
Very good
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 3 . 7/4/2018
Damn. He got shut the fuck down.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17/2018
I doubt Lyarra's disguise will fool Arthur. Even if he believes her disguise at first, he'll dream it later, right? If he dreams about Lyle the pretty-faced boy, I bet he'll have a dream about Lyle the boy suddenly stripping, gaining breasts, then putting on a dress and becoming Lyarra the pretty-faced girl!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/17/2018
Hah, that was creative with the whole leeches and supposed bastard Bolton thing to hide her period. But how does Alleras hide it? And I hope she does meet Oberyn at some point because he's such a lover of women (and men) that I bet he'd know in an instant that she's really female!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2018
Oh nevermind, that would be Sarella Sand?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2018
..."likely the only two ladies to ever disguise themselves as men and study for their maester's chains."

Wait, who's the second girl who is a boy in disguise? Or was that just a mistype?
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