shame this was abandoned

Its good but can be confusing especially when you transition from a character speaking to thinking.
I would suggest using italic to the words and minimizing this ( ' ) to only one in the beginning and the end to every thoughts. You should maybe expand a bit more about Naruto's interaction with the others cause it also confuses me at times.

Good story though, I like how its developing and the decision Naruto makes regarding the monsters he meets and to how much effort you must have given to come up with this. Its very good to me.

Actually this seems like you’re modeling the world after goblin slayer, even slightly.

In goblin slayer, he said to the priestess that he even killed the baby goblins because they had genetic memory passed down, ensuring that every goblin is evil. (Or something to that effect)

Now you dont need to go deleting the story or anything since this is a fanfiction, just wanted to let you know.

And maybe have him change race ;)

Its only 2 chapters right now, and i dont understand half of what they’re saying, but dang this is good!

There were a few (less than 10 for sure, not sure of the exact number) grammatical errors, like using "to" instead of "too". So it's definitely a story I'm going to enjoy reading (hi, I'm a beta reader, but I don't add story when I beta read, I fix spelling, punctuation, and occasionally grammar, spelling being my biggest pet peeve). I really enjoyed reading it so far, so I hope you update it again soon, as in within a month or two, because I'll probably forget the plot of it otherwise. I read a lot, so I find I forget what happened in quite a few stories, and lose interest because of it.

hope to read more.

It's good. When ypu going to update it.

i really enjoyed this Story so farthe rabbits were really funny :P

Heh, his new family is gonna be surprised to find see that he evolved that quickly. I find myself curious to see how you'll have his and the others evolutions go, and just how they'll progress as the story goes on.

Well, this certainly a different start than usual. I like it. Nice to see how Naruto got the women to give the kids a chance. I'll be curious to see how/if they can integrate them into human culture.

Also, I agree with the premise of your story description. Re: Monster is a story with a great premise... But the main character is just to much of a jerk. That's why I've mostly started following: Tensei Shitara Datta Ken. The protagonist is just way more likeable.

I really like this story, I hope it will be continued in the future.

This is an interesting take on the Re:Monster premise, I hope you continue it.

Please please please please please please please please please create more of your story

Why must naruto share EVERYTHING with his clan. It doesn't even look like they are going to develop the abilities any time soon for the war, so it is useless.

so far its a neat story don't think I've heard of someone going this route for the captives or with the system so looking forward to more