| Reviews for Betrayal & Love |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/9 To angelsarah22: the author must have changed it or one of us counted wrong because it wasn't 63 mates it was 160 one of which is dead. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/8 Over already? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8 nice |
 Lady Ara of Slytherin chapter 1 . 5/31 I know you have abandoned this fanfic and probably won't see this, but I have to vent out my frustrations. .FIRST. TOO MANY GODDAMN TITLES/FAMILY RELATIONS/INHERITENCES/MATES! I'm really sorry but this is just so totally unbelievable, I spent thirty minutes reading through all of the inheritance tests. And don't get me wrong, I would love being able to read a fanfic for hours on end, but it was literally just the same sentence repeated over and over again with little-to-no difference. .SECOND. The reactions of Harry, Ragnok, the 'Mates' and family relations are just... not how anyone would react to this kind of situation. I know some OCCness is to be accepted, you could even change almost all of a character's personality!... But this... this is changing the entire human races reaction to anything THAT much of a shock. I'm sure most of the people there had gone into shock or had fainted. |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 4/9 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| little-bast chapter 3 . 2/4 just found this... Love it How will his family react to finding out how he was treated by the dursleys? ( would love to see the newly discovered family members rain hell on them maybe even dumbledore for his lack of care in Harry's home life) How will the avengers react to The discovery tony is Harry's dad and new about the conditions? Please update soon! |
| G Wash chapter 3 . 1/9 You should continue this story,its so amazing and very captivating |
| inuyasha16451 chapter 3 . 1/7 Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon |
| millerr123 chapter 3 . 9/26/2019 Please update |
| OlympusWitch12 chapter 1 . 9/15/2019 Dude, you really need to fix these glaring mistakes of yours. Vanaheim and Jotunheim are the names of realms, not the people who live in them. Those would be the Vanir Gods/Goddesses (vanaheim) and the Jotuns/Giants (jotunheim). The proper name for the residents of Asgard is the Aesir Gods/Goddesses, but Asgardians works just fine. Also, the residents of both vanaheim and Asgard can just be called Aesir and Vanir respectively as both peoples are classed as gods/goddesses. I just can’t let this error slide |
| fallondyson chapter 3 . 8/8/2019 PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE |
| Frost Merry Darkness Luver chapter 1 . 7/26/2019 oh yeah, I remember this ridiculousness. it is improbable and packed with to many people, no wonder you abandoned it |
| gleefanforever09 chapter 3 . 7/15/2019 love it please write more |
| 12456237-DeleteAccountPlease chapter 3 . 6/19/2019 Wow interesting update soon please. Can't wait to read more here. |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 3 . 6/2/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
