Reviews for Once in a Lifetime |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i had a feeling it was caline becayse once there was a mention of loving people or something like that, but you gooled me by keeping the 5 minutes timer even if caline us an adult. But probably st the time you wrote this story time tagger hadn't happened yet so you didn't kniw this detail, as you didn't kniw that the lucky charm is lost when ladybug detransforms. The story is a masterpiece as usual, i really enjoyed it like i enjoyed trying to find out "Carol". Thanks for writing! Off reading your next one :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was wonderfully executed and had me guessing the entire way through who our temp bug could be. Alya and Chloe were the easiest to rule out for obvious reasons. I thought I had a good answer multiple times... until you revealed more elements that crossed them off the potentials list. Your reveal made COMPLETE sense in the end. Bravo for executing this marvelous story! |
![]() ![]() I love the way you eliminated possible ladybugs! It was super fun to try to figure out who it could be and I was so glad it was Ms Bustier! Your clues made her the most likely candidate after Mylene was eliminated but they were so enjoyably subtle! Great job, such a fun story, I love the dancing around each other's identities in this story and swapping miraculouses around was a hoot. Well written and awesome! Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Kept me wondering about the identity until the last clue. Very clever and ambiguous writing to keep it a nice surprise. I really adore how you tend to keep your dialogue and actions from being OOC pretty much all the time! Thank you for another great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this was so much drama! And, uh, the only bit I laughed loud was with Plagg "doing the math". That was legitness :D I was betting it could be Sabine, but then it clicked to me... no, it can't be. And Caline was a surprise! Nicely lead story! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guessed Sabrina too. Darn! what a great story and good job keeping her identity secret! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I was thinking Ms. Bustier too. This is how my list went (in order of chapters : 1. Chloe (idk y) 2. Mylene (idk y either, i just thought it'd be interesting to see her break out of her shell and face her fear of akuma attacks. I thought it was her up until- 3. Sabrina (red hair comment) 4. Caline (red hair comment) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, you surprised me... n.n Great work! |
![]() ![]() I don't know if I wrote a review of this or not but I did wonder if it was Caline Bustier who got the earrings. I enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One nitpicky thing, since heros is plural, it would be “mes petits heros”. French adjective agreement is fun... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... i got the hair colour right with alya? anyway, this has been an amazing fic! thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing and wonderful story and I enjoyed it immensely! I might not have said anything, but from the outset I had narrowed it down to either Sabrina or Caline. As of this chapter, I still had it narrowed to those two, but finally figured it out at the fake-out in the department store. That's when I knew for sure who it was. This was very well written and an amazing ride! Also, love how you managed to preserve the status quo, maddening as it is, when most authors would've gone for a reveal here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great chapter, and a great story. I didn't see that reveal coming. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't see it coming! Well done! |
![]() ![]() Ahhh, I’m mentally beating myself up for not guessing sooner! It had crossed my mind but then I thought it was someone Maribette’s age. But it all makes sense! I really like that it was Ms. Bustier. |