Reviews for Heartlines
chibi-Clar chapter 23 . 3/12
Awwwww so cute and sweet.
chibi-Clar chapter 22 . 3/12
Beautiful!
chibi-Clar chapter 21 . 3/11
Lol. Omg~ it’s happening
chibi-Clar chapter 20 . 3/11
Beautiful! Hermione coming in and being all awesome! Power!
chibi-Clar chapter 19 . 3/11
Welll I think his people will remember that during this time, the King wasn’t e fighting to protect his people and kingdom but instead off hiding.
chibi-Clar chapter 18 . 3/11
Awesomness
Lucyole chapter 23 . 2/4
Really great story very interesting and exciting. Thorfinn really changed for Hermione and took on the responsibility of first his father's estate and then the kingdom. Fenrir really to was a surprise good thing he was on Hermione's side. They got their happy end and others too. *cookies for inspiration and the great work*
Lucyole chapter 13 . 1/30
Really interesting story so far very good the Rowels ate a great family and love each other very much, Thorfinn acted a bit idiotic with Hermione's feelings but want to recify it now that he found that his father is OK with him marrieng Hermione and probably even waited for Thorfinn to ask him. Tom nows how charming he can be but he really shouldn't have killed Ivar really big mistakes that he will pay for soon. Rabastan and Luna like that pairing really how did you came to those two love them nonetheless. And Hermione's brothers put Thorfinn to the test if he really want Hermione back or is just full of hot air. Now onto the rest of the story.
Drsquirrel chapter 23 . 1/21
Not my normal ship, but I ended up binging this in 1 day. Loved it!
Sophisticated Sage chapter 23 . 11/20/2019
Brilliant story, as always! :D
PaulinaDragona chapter 23 . 11/12/2019
I like your fiction !
erm31323 chapter 23 . 10/5/2019
Wonderful ending to a fantastic story. I really enjoyed this one!
erm31323 chapter 22 . 10/5/2019
Loved this chapter! Thorfinn has definitely grown up and I love that Hermione is going to be queen. Their wedding was lovely, the way they incorporated all the traditions into it.
erm31323 chapter 20 . 10/5/2019
Yes! I am glad that Hermione was the one to kill Tom. And doubly glad that it's over. Wondering who is going to be king now.
erm31323 chapter 19 . 10/5/2019
I thought Theo's comment might come back to bite him. I'm glad that Fenrir didn't completely betray Thorfinn, I'm hoping that telling Tom something was part of the plan. As much as I know Thorfinn wants his revenge, I honestly would love to see Hermione dispatch Tom.
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