Nice.

Wow another good one shot from you its great storytelling for such a short dtory and after reading it a second time it got better because you knew its hiccup and the last line fits perfectly with him nice one

Kinda saw it coming, but it was good nevertheless xD I love me a good exit line, especially from Hiccup.

hahahaha this was great!

The answer of Hiccup is so awesome and hilarious. And The hunters are to dumb or drunk to react immediately, so he can escape. That’s so funny.

predictable, but well executed

That fits so well with your profile picture by the way. X)

I absolutely adore it. Such a delight. I loved the punchline, although the real Hiccup would be too smart to say "self-portrait" - on second thought, he has not been the sharpest knife in the drawer on occasion, so perhaps I'm wrong! Such an adorable image, though, the bar, the hunters, the fish for Toothless - SWOON! Also, I didn't tell you this in Vicariously, but I LOVE that Toothless has a female dragon and it's NOT a romantic partner! MOMMY LovE! Seriously, I haven't replied to your review reply yet, but this was recced to me. I love it so much. Your Hiccup being protective of Toothless and taking care of him, whatever the 'verse... I just melt. Thank you for this.

That ending is brilliant! Only Hiccup would do something like that XD

giggles maniacally Love it!

LOL! The punch line totally blindsided me! Well-played!

This was both brilliant and fun.

Ohoho, imagine the hunters' reactions :D

I bet after they wake up from their hangovers...massive hangovers, they may not be able to recall anything from that night...

CB73