Reviews for Naruto: The Second Coming
IWolfAssassin chapter 12 . 7/6
I love this story so far and I believe you mastered that cliff hanger very well in chapter 11. I got to be honest was a little disappointed with the cliffhanger after reading chapter 12, but that is me trying to play out the other side story and got my hopes squashed. Otherwise I did like chapter 12 and hope to see the continuation in the next couple of chapters.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/15
Why didnt they kill yugito? It seems dumb to leave her alive, I mean she is a psychopath and most likely will try and target naruto and mito in the war. So wouldn't naruto rationalize killing her as a smart decision?
lachyfrost chapter 7 . 6/1
I don't understand please someone explain cause I'm having a fucking metal break down because if it. Why the fuck didn't they Yugito, he already know his a true Shinobi so why didn't he kill her, why didn't the other boy. It doesn't make fucking sense. and why the fuck is a true Shinobi always getting fucking snuck up on, please your gotta change this or just don't repeated it ever again. If you didn't want her to get fucking killed off then you shouldn't have used her in the first place. Don't do this bullshit where you change the main character from what you've already displayed just cause you like a certain character
Rus228 chapter 12 . 5/5
Should I wait to continue?
Phantom of the Future chapter 12 . 4/30
When’s that next chapter tho
RandomHobo chapter 12 . 4/27
I hope you can take a new direction with the Uchiha massacre. Doesn’t have to be a different outcome, but jut done differently? Whatever that Naruto does to be branded as a traitor, it is most unlikely for him to go the canon itachi route.

Love your story!
WayDownBeLo chapter 12 . 3/24
miss this story
Train Heartnett chapter 12 . 3/21
i need an update for this
Uchiha Arashi chapter 1 . 3/19
can you please update this story
j12heu123y chapter 3 . 3/16
honestly this story is one of the few ones that i actually like
IceyBoi2003 chapter 12 . 3/10
I... Love this story! Plz continue
Ricardo Soto chapter 2 . 3/7
Also I hope the Uchiha massacre won’t happen. So far in your story having the presence of Uchiha clan is nice and if their is bloodshed I hope it’s only a number of Uchiha clan extremists and not not the whole clan with possibly Izumi joint the Akatsuki.
Ricardo Soto chapter 1 . 3/7
Please continue honestly such a great story so far love the way you been writing so far and the character developments. I like how you started a war with Kumo many people avoid doing war between villages in their stories which baffles me because theirs so much potential that can be done and it’s a realistic outcome after Kumo attempts at two kidnaps. Hope to see a update soon keep up the good work.
Foxlight6956 chapter 12 . 3/2
Looking forward to the next update! A solid story.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
man please update, its been too long
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