It feels like she's a bit of a plot device.

That was sweet. You nailed the characters.

Wait, was Sandy there at that point?

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

I think you should write more , when you can, as it is really good so for,please and thank you.

I have just discovered this and it looks amazing! But I’ll have to wait to read it, since my exams are this week. However, I’m so excited! It has been a long time since I read an interesting rotg fanfic. Have some hugs! :)

I think you should write more , when you can, please and thank you.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you. And love the direction you went in there very cheeky if you ask me.

I think you should write more when you can as it is getting really interesting so for, please and thank you. I think that in the next chapter you should write that the tooth fairy is first of the guardians to get really mad at dawn for what she has done to the young,s gurdian.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, yet interesting as well, please and thank you.

I think you should write more , when you can, but I think you should write one where dawn gets in trouble for being so mean to a child neither the less a guardian that the man in the moon and thank you.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, yet funny and cute as well as a little bit sad at times. Please and thank you.

Well that was an interesting encounter. Poor Jack just seems to be left in the dark on everything. It was interesting to see death make an appearance. Great work. I'm looking forward to next time.