I love this story! I feel obi-wan needed a chance at having a good wife. Didn't like how Anakin was described but can't deny his nature! Keep up the good work!

Re: kira and leith... I KNEW IT! Yesss! But also noooo cuz I know they died. Dammit.

"this time we have forever." I cried. I actually cried. Omg.

Sobs. Thank you. This was wonderfully written. You covered so much ground and put a totally new spin on Star Wars that was so fun and special to read. Perfect way to end MB. Thank you again for sharing this vision and epic story with us!

I really like the idea of Leia and Luke facing Vander and Palpatine together! Sigh. So somber and bittersweet though. Obi-Wan’s loss is deeply felt here. The moment of warm breeze was really good. *tears up*

As sad and choked up as I am... much more epic end for Obi-Wan. And I loved Kira taking the lightsaber how she did. I just have no other words though. So sad. I know it’s inevitable BUT STILL. Wahh!

Dude this is a cool twist. The new Jedi order. Luke and Leia knowing about Vader right off!

I don’t know why but Luke seeing trees for the first time really seems poignant and sweet. Excuse me while I feelings.

Love seeing the Kenobis together. MORE FEELINGS! And then all Padmé’s children too. Ugh!

Gregar and Sabé are bro’s for life as usual and I love them so.

Tell Luke what truth?! Omg!

Surely that's a health and safety hazard, she thought idly.

Hahahahaha! You sassy author you.

Obiwan liiiives! And now this chapter is just like super fun and adventurous. Btw I loved how you rewrote the Vader and Obi-Wan dialogue. Well done.

Holy shit. This is awesome. She’s on the Death Star. Omg. This is a plot line I’ve ever read before I don’t think. AHHHH!

Obi-Wan coming to be with Sabé in her grief is wonderful. Sigh. I love them. Waking up together was SQUEEE. Somber and reflective and bittersweetness of aging. It kind of choked me up.

Gregar and Sabé’s children meeting. Another moment full of heart and feels!

OMG! You tied Sabé into Rogue One. Amazing move and now I’m like...! BUT OBIWAN IS ABOUT TO DIE NOOOO I CANT BEAR THIS

Qui-Gon is Kira’s grandpa. I have accepted this as canon and no one will convince me otherwise!

I am deceased. Obi-Wan asking Sabé to marry him was really really romantic. UGH. Obviously she said yes!

Rey Kenobi! *punches air*

PADME DYING *falls to knees and covers face*
I figured it had to happen… and there is a poetic type of quality to him figuring out about Gregmé and wanting revenge. Poor Gregar… I’m glad he and his son are okay though.

"I'm sorry this didn't happen sooner," he said quietly.
"Don't," she said adamantly, resting a fingertip against his lips. "You needed to be certain, and I would wait as long as I had to for this."
"Even if it never happened?"
"Even then.”

Soooo romantic. Ugh.

OMG surprise children indeed! Ahh! I’m afraid for all as usual but cautiously optimistic. And SO many feels about Obi-Wan being a dad but not knowing! Wah. You are a truly gifted and evil author lol.

I believe first aid response to an embedded projectile or stabbing implement is to leave it in, because it is preventing or slowing additional blood loss in the event of the object’s removal. Steve Irwin might have survived if he hadn’t removed the stingray’s spine/barb from his chest. Like shrapnel, it caused more damage coming out.

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I’m a ball of happiness. But you’re probably going to smash my joy into oblivion soon so I’m gonna try to be tough hahaha.

I love the explanations you gave for Luke keeping his last name. I never thought about it before but damn that’s a big head scratcher in canon haha.

And well. The rest of the chapter just shattered me apart. Cute toddler leia helps but... ITS SO TRAGIC AND MY INSIDES HURT.

Omg. My heart is broken. This is more painful that ROTS! Honestly.