Please write faster.

Such a good chapter! Thank you for updating! I can't wait to read more :) I love it :)

So good! Update soon!

Please write more, I love how you showed his powers more too. Love it sooo much

This was a great first chapter! It really made you feel bad for Annabeth and Percy.

I have to call bullshit at the beginning of the chapter. There is no way he recovered in one day! When he blew up Mt. Saint Helen he had to recover with Calipso
and her magical island for TWO WEEKS.

Ooo yes I agree scary Percy is not as well know when talking about the after effects of Tartarus in stories. As always, great chapter you did a great job of potraying scary Percy. Update soon!

Totally think Percy is allowed to have some dark and angry moments. Loved it?

Posted too early... I love that you had darker Percy. I agree that so many people ignore that part of him. Did anyone else notice that after HoH(Slash post-Tartarus), Rick Riordan didn’t put any insight as to what Percabeth might actually be thinking or doing in any of his books... Only how they act on the outside.

I loved this chapter. I can’t wait for more!

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I like this. Nice story, nice idea, update please.

I love this fanfic so much, you did an amazing job writing the characters.

This story is amazing. I don't think he was too overpowered, and I think you potrayed him using his power well. Percy obviously has a reluctancy to use their powers but after Annabeth pushing him he could use it to such a large extent. Please update soon! I would love to see more Percabeth in their daily lives after the war and like the little changes people might notice because of Taratarus.

this is seriously good for a first story on here! you incorporate persassy which is always key, and I definetly like wha you did with the fight. honestly, I dont know why uncle rick didnt do that either. I also dont know why he didnt add more ptsd from going through hell and back (literally). I cannot wait for the next chapter, and the one after that, and the one after that, so keep them coming as fast as I can read them!