| Reviews for Yandere Simulator A Twist Of Fate |
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   Ethel13 chapter 14 . 3/22 I enjoyed this story a lot, you added in a bunch of interesting ideas and it worked well. I do hope you continue this at some point but I would like to thank you for writing such an interesting and well written story. |
| iDimensional chapter 14 . 9/3/2019 I absolutely love your writing! Thank you so much for following on my story~ Hope to read the full chapter soon! You're very talented 0 |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 14 . 5/11/2019 LOVE IT! |
| TacoFire chapter 14 . 5/10/2019 Oh my god, wow, I loved this. So interesting and bittersweet! It reminds me of the song "Future Line" by 40mp (I usually listen to the cover by LucyHasYou on YT). Freaking awesome! |
| Lucian Naruto chapter 14 . 5/10/2019 Dude... that was beautiful. You really do a good job. |
| 160300 chapter 13 . 4/14/2019 This is oddly well put together. |
| Firelord67 chapter 1 . 3/5/2019 you need commas. LOTS of commas |
| Lucian Naruto chapter 13 . 2/10/2019 Kokona is MUCH better without the presence of this father failure in her life. |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 13 . 2/9/2019 LOVE IT! |
| HSKSHJSHSKSH chapter 13 . 2/9/2019 I'm really happy to see another chapter of this! And 'dependency often fostered loyalty'...Wow. Just. WOW. It's so deep. And I like how you pay attention to the old times (aka the 1980s events), which is shown by the Yakuza appearing. There is one thing you need to fix, which is some of the characters' spellings sometimes, like the Yazuka, which is spelled the Yakuza. Anyway, I finally wrote a Yandere Simulator fanfiction...and ended up stealing your idea for Midori GURINU being Ayano's friend lol But that idea's mostly inspired from YandereDev's video about Ayano's childhood. I already can't wait to see the next chapter! |
| TacoFire chapter 13 . 2/8/2019 Wow... I love how this all came togther. I especially love the line "dependency often fosters loyalty." It was the perfect way to illustrate Ryoba's plan. This chapter was really awesome. I knew that disclaimer involved Kokona. There's already plenty 'bad' words and 'offensive' content (murder) but bad wirds when it pertains to sexual stuff is always somehow the most squeamish. |
| milva281197 chapter 13 . 2/8/2019 Me encanto este nuevo capitulo, es una de mis historias favoritas de yandere simulator. Por favor no la abandones |
| SillyPanda3 chapter 12 . 2/2/2019 wow! I wish the chapters were longer or at least came out faster but other than that this is my favorite yan sim fic |
| aweseme chapter 12 . 1/19/2019 keep up the grand work dude! its been a great story so far! |
| flamecom chapter 12 . 1/12/2019 Unless Ryoba pulls some tricks up from her sleeve the boy is unlikely to get the death penalty. Because in Japan the death penalty is reserved to serial killers and all this boy has is two murder attempts. |
