Man, I’m crying now.
This was another heart wrenching chapter, of course, but I fear for the future. Lukov always seems to have something in that god-forsaken sleeve of his, and I dare say the happiness and fluff won’t last super long.
A big part of me doesn’t want Adie to forgive Peter right away, you know let him hurt a little more to give him a lesson, but man, he’s been through enough already...
I am frantically awaiting the next chapter, Into the Light has become one of my absolute favorite stories an the platform right now, and that’s saying something, given that I’m an absolute sucker for angst and death.
Bravissimo,

- Chaos

Quizás hay dos partes de ella, una es el soldado del invierno, que hará cosas sin que ella se de cuenta, y luego esta Adie que cuando despierte quizás en algún lugar sin saber como llego, y no recuerde lo que hizo se dará cuenta que su mente esta inestable. Quizás eso se vio en el escáner cerebral?,
bueno esto es una teoría solamente. Buen capitulo, me encanto espero que actualices pronto.

Be warned of the honeyed words;
Lest they lead you astray.
A downed guard is no guard;
And will lead you to ruin.
No matter what keep your hubris in check;
Or it will be your downfall.
And you shall succumb to the honeyed words;
And create a Sue of your loved OC.
But I fear you have succumbed already;
And so I bid you adieu.
And little Mary was born again;
And took the name of Adelaide

Love this! Please update soon

I am so freaking happy right now. Like AHHHH! It’s like 8:30 where I am and I’m sure that half my block just heard me scream. AHHH! Thank god.
I literally cried at the first 3 words. I couldn’t help it.

Please update soon!

Why would Lukov want Ada to die?

Question: why would Lukov want Ada to die?

I cried like, a lot so...
I say you nailed this book.
I can’t say if she will remember if she wakes up.
I hope so.
Oh, also never joke about it being the last chapter.

Damn.
Sorry for the language but, that's really the only word that I can sum up my feelings with right now. That was a tear snarching, heart-wrenching chapter and you wrote it really well. I can tell you spent a lot of time on it, because the quality is up there.
But man, that question at the end, why did you do that to me?
Gosh, could she really not remember him? Aaaahhh?
Once again, phenomenal job, I'm excited to read the next chapter!
- Chaos

holy shit! no... honestly when Tony started crying and begging her to wake up I totally lost it and started crying too. wow. the ending. as much as i would love to see her wake up i think this part have it purpose. but I am not ready yet to read how Tony and the others will take it ... . well until she wakes up of course. damn. this is chapter was good. I tried to listen to the playlist but it's not working on my phone idk why. I will try at my computer and see what's gonna happen. hopefully it will work.

Fuck you

Asshole

enough already with what you are putting adelaide through.
it fells like you are tortureing everyone. just have adelaide get better and wake up please.

Yo that was really unexpected, it definitely didn't go the way I thought it would, but I'm still really excited to see how things play out, Lukov was too smug for me to actually believe she's going to stay dead

ahhhh i can't wait till next week!