i love this story and admire the hard work you put into it. thank you so much

This story is filled with full of suicidal thoughts and over thinking about the character from what he read instead of living what he is as.

Sorry too much negativity for me to continue the fic.

Depression is on an whole another level.

A shame there's no more. An excellent start, though I do think there's a touch too much angst. However, you have shown him to be on the road of recovery in a very nice way. If you do update, I look forward to it. Thanks!

I got to chapter 6 and quit. The story is awful, the chapters too short and "orochimaru" is not talking at all. I hate this.

You do good work Thank You for making this.

Well, I don't know the team number but I thought the three stood for the number of people? Otherwise it wouldn't be the legendary three but the legendary team three? Or are you just saying that they weren't one of the teams numbered 7, but actually team 3, because that's an interesting fact then.

Uhh, Tobirama is the younger brother though...? Right?

This is a very delicious fic. 10/10!

Jesus Christ how could something as horribly dull as writing about a mute orphan child. Orochimaru may as well be a pet rock for the sake of your plot

I love this story’s concept! I’ve never seen any other Orochimaru reincarnation fics before so this was really refreshing to read :)

Bro, you've already overdone the amount of angst. I suggest rewriting this story and making it good.

Why so depressing? you are the infamous Orochimaru! think of all the things you could do! with future knowledge it should be easy to get stronger than canon Orochimaru ever could, like, master sage mode etc etc.

so much stuff now doesn't add up. You should rewrite some of your chapters.

I think in cannon Jiraiya learns sealing from the toads.

no explanation on how he managed to teleport?