Reviews for Can I Be A Good Father?
roguekrown chapter 1 . 5/19
Good story loved how when naruto has a baby it forces him to mature
zerozeno chapter 2 . 12/7/2019
Ok one Sakura is not the strongest female in her generation if we are talking about all around. Now if we are talking physically then yes she's number one in that regard sure but having ONE over powered regeneration move does not make you the strongest female in your generation this is not a flame just cold hard facts. Also everyone is so tired of the angry female who beats on the mc bullshit in anime at this point and Sakura just takes that waaaay to far because her creator was a fool who thought that was funny and tool that waaaay to far. Not a flame just an opinion which you are free to ignore I just had to say my piece
Draegoon chapter 2 . 9/29/2019
i know you probably don't want a different suggestion but what about Shizune? i mean they seem like they would click especially with a baby their to cause them to see each other more also not nearly enough Naruto x Shizune fics out there. if not i say Ino or the OC.
SeiferBoy chapter 2 . 9/27/2019
Quick question. Does Naruto absolutely need to be paired with anyone? Plenty of single fathers out in the world. Being a single father is more challenging and can add more plot and character development in the story. Just a thought.
Sir Naru chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
i do hope you update this, it's hard to find good father naruto stories.

I also hope that the pairing isn't sakura or hinata, cause a bunch of those father naruto stories have them as the pairing too.
APeaceOfPie4Everybody011 chapter 2 . 8/5/2019
Hi just started love your stoey so far can't wait to read more.
cg037 chapter 2 . 4/25/2019
A great story so far, keep up the good work.
Demon Bro the 14th chapter 2 . 4/19/2019
Just not Sakura honestly just don’t like her
Guest chapter 2 . 4/12/2019
NaruIno would be nice
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2019
Read the fanfic "medicinal lullaby" similar in theme.
Will give you another mature/developee theme.
Its quiet old
anoyak111 chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
Go with ino
Merchant Of Blue Death chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
I can't tell you how happy I am at seeing you update this story. There are more than a few minor things wrong in grammar and sentence construction but to let you save face I plan on sending you a PM about what I found and hopefully a suggestion in how to fix things. You have a very good story of a single father Naruto but the quality of it suffers from errors in grammar, misuse of words, and sentence construction. All of these can be fixed with the proposal I will be sending you.

As for a partner for Naruto and a new mother for Haku-chan, please take a look at my suggestions/arguments for each girl that is in Naruto's age bracket minus Hinata. I didn't include any girls from the movies as Shion's position would not allow for her to either leave the temple nor have time to devote to a step-child. The girl from the Naruto movie "Bonds" would be a good choice for the two since she's a healer like Sakura but not a ninja as well as is Sakura and the other girls. I'll give you my entire reasoning in the PM if you wish. I will say this for both Ami and Amaru, they are both basically blank templates for existing characters as that they already have names and a rudimentary history but nothing more is heard from them after their parts in the story have played out.

I will have my PM sent sometime in the next day or so with all I want to say to you about the story as a whole and reasoning as to what each girl can bring into Naruto and Haku's lives as well as why they would be a good choice. Take care and I hope we see the next update release faster than the almost year-long gap that this chapter had after the story was first posted.
TheGreatSeeker chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
Amazing story so far can’t wait to see where you go with it.
kgarz01 chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
speaking. not specking.
biginferno chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
interesting story I will be hoping for Ino to be the pairing
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