Should really get someone to actually find all the wrong use of words and typos and fix them. Its like every paragraph has something wrong with it concerning a word or two. At first it was easy to ignore through the first book and up until this chapter but this chapter seems to have the most I've seen in a chapter.

On the upside. I'm liking the story otherwise I wouldn't have read this far.

Thank you so much for the update! It’s a good post birthday read haha. With all that’s happening on top of personal issues I sure do understand. A one shot with Jex and Nat... hmm it could be how they met and got together. That’ll be a cute story.
But I’m so happy she’s back home with her Minato and everyone else in her world. I’m curious about Jex’s desire to go with her and I’m wondering if Nat will find a way over. Then Obito and his team came over with Kakashi. This’ll be interesting to say in the least. I look forward to the next one when u get the chance.

Jelly xoxo

It's really good... I hope you continue... I would like to know what happens next

I must say I love how you covered the other side of the coin as well.
For one life to be born, one must be gone.

O w O

Me encantó el capítulo! De verdad que me encanta tu historia, y amo la relación entre Rachel y Minato, es tan realista, ella todavía tiene mucho que superar, a veces me estresa, pero más porque ya quiero que estén juntos, pero entiendo que es difícil lo que ella pasó y no es fácil superarlo, y me encanta que sea tan realista en ese sentido. Espero que todo este bien y actualices pronto:)
Pd. Saludos desde Chile! (Sorry por escribir en español, pero mi inglés no es muy bueno y ocupo el traductor google para leer aquí)

wish you happy nnew year
take care of you
I loved the kiss (wish HER minato find out about it) :D

loved it! more please?!

Thanks you for the update,
i loved it,
hope you feel better soon as well.

tha,k for the update and good luck with both your writing and personnel life

loved it! can't wait for more! please update again soon!

Loved it! More please?! Its so awesome!

another great chapter! it will be interresting to see Jex and her reaction to each others

Really enjoyed the chapter. Keep up the good work and can't wait for next chapter.

More chapters please