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I was so sad where. There was no next button I desperately want to read more! Loving the interactions

Plllllzzzzz update! I need my Zack x Rachel ship to sail

That was sooo fucked up, but I love how you try to keep in character. NO mercy

O .Lord! I actually cringed with the whole Roofus thing. Will Gray, Zack and Ray live together or will she really go with that pedo-doc? Will she work at the cafe too? What's gonna happen with Eddie?

Dude, talk about a cliffhanger. Is it cliffhanger season already? I wasn't aware. Oh well, they finally get their... fun little reunion. I honestly don't have much to say. The characterization seems good here, so does the plot for that matter. Really, the only complaint I have is the cliffhangers, but I guess one would need a few of those to make a story interesting, huh?

So I read it on ao3 n then again here, welp still awesome n now I’m just rlly curious on how this will turn out for Danny n eddy n Rachel n zack maybe grays part in this (eh the other lady I ain’t so curious lol)

so good! I loved all the little details and descriptions. I really wanna know if Eddie will snap and go berserk over Ray, and what about Danny? will he get to Ray through the cafe or counseling? and Zack! oh, Lord! will Ray get to have him serve her a cup of decent coffee? what memories is Zack talking about? (does it follow the game or are you adding your own stuff?) I'm glad I started reading this :3

Ah so dark but sooo good, waiting for the next update _

Daaaamnn... that's pretty fucked up, and I love how you have it simulor to the game.

Can't wait till the next chappy

A whisper in the distant " I ship iiiittt..."

This is really creative, I like where its going so far