Reviews for Konoha Gamer
xbox432 chapter 2 . 12/5/2018
Umm, wow, lots of typos here. Specifically places where you repeated sections. Like the shadow clone explanation for example, though there were a few others. Also, you never raised Naruto's stats to twenty. In the section where you show them after he supposedly raises them and chooses his perk, they still say 15.
agnar chapter 2 . 11/13/2018
Eh, lost interest when you, for no reason, had them change the grad test to kawarimi, bushin and 'some other E rank tech' rather than those 2 and henge like canon. Only to then give us the same canon outcome. If ANY of those 3 would be changed, it'd be the clone as it's the most useless.
Riniko22 chapter 3 . 9/22/2018
Thanks for the chapter.
Riniko22 chapter 2 . 9/22/2018
Ok chapter, but it did seem that you repeated some information in the paragraph that Iruka was hit in the back by Mizuki's shuriken.
Riniko22 chapter 1 . 9/22/2018
Nice job, I'll try it out. Maybe Naruto will observe Hinata and realize that some does care about him and leave Sakura alone.
Helily chapter 3 . 9/2/2018
I had fun reading this. _. Thank you!

Always a joy to see a functional Team 7.

Stats at end of chapter but whatever you decide is fine. Even no stat listing. Heh!

(Must there be a pairing? Sigh... Why can you not simply have a Team 7 threesome and leave it at that? XD) (ok ok just ignore me I will deal with whatever you decide gracefully)

Good luck!
Cadelorbe12 chapter 3 . 8/29/2018
Please continue!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 8/21/2018
Hope to see another update soon! Perhaps things will be different down the line in the future? Like possible death preventions? Maybe even a certain snake will be unable to get Sasuke to his side?

Till then!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
Great chapter! I enjoyed this! Although I saw a mistake or two where you repeated the same sentences over and confusing me. FYI.

Anyway, I don’t really have much of a suggestion for Naruto’s pairing. Maybe Ino? Or maybe Tenten?
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
Interesting start! I like how this is beginning!
CodyJaaxs chapter 3 . 8/15/2018
I'm liking this one already, most gamer naruto's focus so much on training that barely any type of progression gets done. I also like how in this fic with team 7 naruto invites them to the party immediately so to help get more stability in the team, thus leaving out so much angst between a getting stronger naruto and saskue. Its. Great fic and can't wait for more!
ElysiumPhoenix chapter 3 . 8/8/2018
I love this story so far, I can't wait to read more. Having the stats at the end would be better, that way if someone doesn't want to read it, it's out of the way.
yuyuyre chapter 2 . 8/7/2018
Ok it's not bad, and I thought I could power through it but your lack of care on paragraphing simply makes this story to annoying to read no matter how interesting your story is. When someone else speaks you must make a new paragraph. Example:
"Hey I love ramen, it's the best!" Naruto screamed while he devoured his favorite food. Sasuke next to him held back from vomiting, the sight making him sick.
"Done slow down, you'll make everyone in here puke!" He finally shouted out.
"Shut up bastard! I'm eating!" Naruto turned around and growled, eyes blood red.
Truth Is What You Make Of It chapter 3 . 7/28/2018
Really liking this so far.
mermizle chapter 3 . 7/26/2018
I’d try to minimize putting full stat pages in to every other chapter at least , they can really pad the word count and are repetitive when there are not big changes.
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