I usually dislike fanfics about a person from this world going into the book's/tv show's/movie's world but this is something special. Epic!

Great story

I may still continue reading this but I do have to say your editing needs serious work. Frequent missing words, letters or simple grammar/spelling mistakes that make it hard to understand and keep to the flow of this story. I’ve seen all the good reviews so I might try with this anyway but would agree with another reviewer that a good re-editing with a beta would be a big help

glad I finally finished this. wonderful fic! thanks for sharing

i feel at peace wow thank you for the journey ️

i keep thinking this fic becomes more and more like a fever dream and I'd like to say the new character is cherry on top HAHA can't stop reading!

bruh this is the most surprising reveal ever LMAOOO SO HE'S THE NEW KID?

really great story, really good development i was never bored, there were no major plotholes and so on. if i had to rate it it would be 10/10 points. the story was really unique, the development and charachterdesign perfect. the writestile let one really feel into the charachter and you HAD to feel with them. i even got onces or twices tears in my eyes and that has no story that i read know film that i watched ever managed. really a great story.

isnt it 1/2 shapeshifter 1/4 human 1/4 vampire?

it screamed supernatural good joke he is supernatural. can you call it that? :)

Great story!

Ok so the idea for this story is a good one, but you need to do some serious work on your character and the flow of the story. You said she read the books and watched the movies and you started out with her be long all knowing then the next minute she knows nothing. She started having visions, you never expanded on that. She heard Jasper’s thoughts, you never went into that either and suddenly those two details just kind of fall out of the story and aren’t brought up again. Like I said, the idea of this story is really good but I think you may need to look into rewriting the whole thing with a beta reader to make it less confusing. Don’t be discouraged! Keep improving!

I read this all in one sitting as you had me gripped almost constantly! Thank you for the wild ride.

I cried! Even my daughter was telling me don't cry. I could not stop reading. I loved it! I can't wait to read more of your work!

the supernatural references make me chuckle!