Reviews for Annals of Arithmancy
Guest chapter 24 . 7/21
What a glorious trilogy thank you!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/17
Confusing
Guest chapter 11 . 7/17
Why tf are foreign entities mad at granger and doubting her abilities? Like they could do any better? I mean for real that seems super unrealistic
Guest chapter 5 . 7/16
Ugh getting politics involved is so lame especially when it is run-of-the-mill corrupt Camilla Harris who slept with her boss to get the only decent job she ever had. Then she went around locking up all of us blacks unfairly. Seems like this weird hyper intense media outcry is warping your thoughts... weird for a person who write about critical thinking but that just me critically thinking
Raeger chapter 24 . 7/5
A fitting end to a series built on arithmancy. Brilliant stuff, really enjoyed it. The early years in Hogwarts were a good mix of exploring arithmantic ideas and also the implications of the expansions you made to the story (eg. Professor Vector's role in the philosopher's stone and a liaison with Hermione's parents). Book 4 felt like the focus of the story shifted too much towards Hermione, especially with the final challenge of the Triwizard and much more dense math being explained in great detail. The balance felt better for the later parts of the story though.

Probably as a consequence of Hermione's increased role, Ron took a big step back, even with his contributions towards runes. I did think you made an effort to keep different characters involved, like Cedric returning in the battle of Hogwarts for example, but I don't think we heard from him regarding Cho's death, which was strange. That said, you definitely made the effort to build on previous parts of the story like with Hermione's new basilisk coat. The more international nature of your story (premised on a more famous Hermione Granger) tied in well with the conclusion you were working towards here with the bringing down of the Statute of Secrecy.

However, the unknown ultimate fate of Crouch Jr. (how to find his hocrux) and the Dementors feels like a loose thread, especially given the personal importance of these matters to Hermione, and how the dementor situation seemed to be escalating just as Marcus was kidnapped. Given how international the dementor situation got, story-wise, it ought to have been acknowledged by other characters / factored into the situation at the ICW with the Statute of Secrecy.

But all of these points are sorta moot - stories are done, and thanks very much for the great read.
Esciam chapter 24 . 6/30
How about a end!
But I think it was a really good way to finish it. With a new beginning...
I just want to say that I love your story, all three of them. The way you change it with logic, the way you though so much about that universe and explain it... It was so beautiful, and I'm right away with the animagus world.
Very good work!
Anonymous chapter 13 . 5/28
Centrifugal force is not a real force! Hermione of all people should know that!
Sage Nameless chapter 24 . 5/25
AHHHHHH THIS IS SO FANTASTIC! Will there ever be a 4th part going over the reaction of the muggle world to magic? Even something a few thousand words. There aren't *nearly* enough fics that deal with that.
HexasMancer chapter 24 . 5/15
Truly excellent. What a wonderful story, from the very beginning to the very (conclusive) end. Thank you for writing!
CCXC chapter 24 . 5/11
Just effing awesome
fyi1183 chapter 7 . 4/27
Huh, so now Hermione invented the GPU. That's new...
Carina37 chapter 24 . 4/20
Thank you so much for your writing. For the past few days I have been walking around eyes glued to the screen as your words came alive. Hiding in bed until 4 am because I couldn't put it down. Nervously thinking about the next step in the few breaks where I turned away from the story. You have created an amazing world and characters and I am sad to see it go. However, maybe now I'll have a few less late nights.
miss j snape chapter 24 . 4/17
I have read this entire series in the past few days and I’m so disappointed it’s over. You’ve managed to create an entirely new world but keep the characters the same at the core whilst developing them far beyond JK ever did. I honestly haven’t been this invested in a fanfiction for years and all I really have to say is thank you for writing it!
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 24 . 4/16
Great series! Loved your George and Hermione coupling. Thanks for sharing!
Jordisk chapter 24 . 3/24
Last time I read this story, Hermione had just been given the Wenlock prize by Rebecca to re-engrave. That was as far as the story had gone, and it was EXCELLENT. I finally came back to this story, and reread from the start to the end of this third story, and I can only say that it got BETTER. Despite you not being a mathematician, you integrated believable mathematics into the story properly. This was probably helped by the math being either dumbed down for the non-arithmancer people Hermione was talking to, or being a basic overview before a "fade to black" conversation on the specifics, or even an introductory class.

The issues Hermione tackles in this final book; finishing her Antimatter proof, dealing with the rise of muggle technology, cleaning up the Dementors, and dealing with Muggle-wizard relations, and even Astoria's blood curse; all cleaned up many of Hermione's personal issues and fears, and the hanging plot threads. My only remaining question is what did Rebecca Gamp and Cedric Diggory end up doing with their lives, because they kinda got dropped from the story for the whole Horcrux arc, and never reappeared.
1,061 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »