Wow! You definitely have a talent for writing! Keep going, and I know you'll be great!

So I'm guessing Ginny was pregnant and lost the baby due to all the Crucios? Is this the end?

I wonder if Umb*tch only squealed on Lucius because she knew of the plan to kidnap Ginny?

I liked seeing Harry with Cho and the Dursleys in Vernon's hospital room! For a second I wondered if Harry would transform into his Phoenix to try to heal Vernon with Phoenix tears, but that would give away his secret to quite a few people, even if they cleared the room first. Interesting pattern on the map of the half blood killers' victims!

Wonderful wedding! Their vows brought tears to my eyes, but my favorite part of this chapter was Arthur's"I loved her first" speech. I also got a kick out of Ginny's ruffling his hair at the altar because it was too flat!

Very cool that Harry will have two animagus forms! The Phoenix form seems especially appropriate, given how gifted he is magically, and how close he was with Dumbledore, and I love that he will take after his dad in his stag form.

I'm very impressed that Harry basically created Mary's magical trunk! It was the coolest gift ever! I'm surprised there wasn't a portrait of her parents in her own little apartment in the trunk, though.

I loved Harry's chocolate frog card! I wonder if Ron and Hermione will have their own chocolate frog cards?

I was very impressed by Harry's performance in his practical tests for Auror training, but especially your descriptions of his duels!

Fabulous idea to name Harry's twist on the Wronski feint after him! I could totally see him being scouted and offered a Seeker position by any pro team! Be sure to watch that your pronouns match with the gender they represent, as there are a few places where her should be his and vice-versa.

I really like how their patroni are keeping watch over their bed and the house as a whole.

I thought it was cool that Harry asked all of Ginny's brothers/dad for permission to marry her. Sweet proposal! I loved Mary's painting of their first kiss...I imagine it will have pride of place wherever she is!

How sad for Mary, losing her dad too...but I'm not surprised Harry asked if he could be named her guardian.

I absolutely love the tribute to all who died at the Battle of Hogwarts! The hall of portraits where loved ones can come visit those they've lost is a brilliant idea, and much better than a memorial statue on the grounds, imo. I can't wait to see Remus' and Tonks' reaction to seeing their boy when Harry brings him!

Aww, very sweet of Harry to invite Mary to stay for Christmas hols at the Burrow. Loved the Order of Merlin ceremony at the ball as well! I kinda figured that's what was up since Kingsley insisted the Weasleys attend the ball.