Reviews for Hunger
Garnet168 chapter 18 . 7/29/2019
That was a really good story and I love how you handled the subject.
WulfyFang3 chapter 18 . 10/4/2018
hahahaha what a way to end the story! that was great. I'm really sad that Brook died, but it was inevitableI'm glad Sanji, Law, and Zoro are on such friendly terms now, though. that's a huge relief. this was such a beautiful story, and I'm glad I got to read it as it developed. congrats on finishing :D
sarge1130 chapter 18 . 10/1/2018
Quite sad that this wonderful story had to end but still, this is such a nice epilogue. The beginning is quite tearful and I almost thought that it was Law and then revealed it was another good 'friend'. It was quite hard losing a loved one but let us remember how their lives touched us with their unique ways.
Thank you for this wonderful story :). You're so good in bringing out their characters and I enjoyed reading how this story progresses. You had written the struggles of the anorexic and the one with the broken heart so well and I was so happy for these two to find each other and rely on each other's strengths. Hope you will update other stories too (if you don't mind hehe). Continue being awesome :D.
sarge1130 chapter 17 . 10/1/2018
I really love Law's personality in this story. I love it how he understands Sanji's situation and also gives him a bit of 'space' just to get comfortable with their new set-up. Although he loves Sanji, he had allowed Sanji to have an 'unlabeled' relationship. Their interaction in this chapter is just so sweet. It was quite cute how they bond by visiting the memory lanes with the CDs. Law is just so cute to share this little history of him. So nice that Law is having a steady recovery but I was saddened when Law feels that he had a little time left. Being an anorexic for so long will leave a huge toll to one's body.
Andy chapter 18 . 9/30/2018
Read the whole thing in 2 days because of how addictive it was. This story made me so sad one moment but made me laugh so hard the next, it was all just amazing.
sarge1130 chapter 16 . 9/30/2018
Nice to see that Law is recovering well and had gained confidence along the way. It's quite understandable why Sanji felt that way - after 13 years of living in a lie is something very difficult to cope up after. However, it was quite amusing how Sanji threatened Shachi about their possible behavior around Law. Sanji's mothering traits on Law is quite funny and it was also fun seeing Law playing along.
I always enjoy reading Law's use of movie reference in every situation. Too bad, geeks like him are quite hard to find. I also laugh at the joke regarding Star Wars and Star Trek, I believe most people can't differentiate the difference. Also, Star Trek's Spock is such a memorable character which most people can easily identify.
sarge1130 chapter 15 . 9/30/2018
This is such a wonderful chapter :). I love Zeff here. He is almost a father figure Sanji should have. I love how he is quite supportive of Sanji's and Law's fight in their different battles. Quite impressive how Zoro matured over the previous chapters. Among the friends, it's quite nice how Luffy is trying to be patch up the situation while Usopp tries to become neutral. Yes, loyalty is important in friendship but Nami is just being biased. If you are truly loyal then she should be neutral and should not get involved in each other's problems. You are just making it worse and will only cause tear among friendship.
I love it how Law handles up the situation quite well. I love his snarky comments on Sanji's friends. It was quite sweet of him to give that comfort to Sanji. He is so selfless, he puts first Sanji's needs against his.
I think this is the kind of closure Sanji needs. Instead of blaming himself for the divorce, it was quite right for Zoro to share the blame also. Although the truth hurts, I think it had eased up Sanji's conscience. I also love Zoro's manly advice to Law. Little did he know that Law is not like him, he hates others to order him around that easily, LOL.
sarge1130 chapter 14 . 9/30/2018
LOL! Sanji does know how to make a good first impression. It's quite nice seeing Rocinante here and had learned a little something about him and his job. I love all the humor you had inserted in this chapter. It's quite funny how Rocinante had suddenly known that his 'baby' is not that innocent at all. Although there's a lot of tension between Rocinante and Sanji, it just balances out with all the funny scenes with Rocinante and Law.
Although Rocinante is quite protective over Law, it was quite sad to see how fragile he thinks of him. He is like Law's friends who are not quite supportive of Law's venture to 'adventure'. This is something Law sees on Sanji which makes Law get attracted to him. Although Sanji knows that about Law's health, he knows how strong is the spirit is.
I love the sexy scene most especially the dick joke. LOL. Law's description of Sanji's kind of reminds me of an almost hairless puppy being held by one hand.
Rae chapter 18 . 9/29/2018
So, I read this all in one day and I just can't communicate how much I love it? I mean, the character development, Law's entire personality, Brook as a dog, Bepo as a lizard, and the whole spy shit like what the fuck. I just love it so much and it's so hard for me to find something that stays with me like this. This was amazing and I hope you continue writing in the future. Also, was the note on the windshield from Kid? And was that why Roci and Aokiji were following him?
Domoto55 chapter 18 . 9/28/2018
Thank you. I love your works. Looking forward for the next one!
sarge1130 chapter 13 . 9/28/2018
Aww, so nice that Brook had finally met up his 'mommy'. Although Law already had Bepo, Brook had already made a special place in Law's heart. Bepo and Brook's interactions are so cute. Bepo is quite cuddly to Law and I think he sees Brook as a sort of rival for Law's affection, lol.
Oh, so much drama! Although Law and Sanji are coming out well in their own 'battles', it's quite bad that sometimes there are people (or friends) who are still seeing negative things in everything. I think they are trying to help but sometimes it just hinders one person to grow. However, it turns out well since these two had been able to realize the importance of the other person in their own life.
LOL! I have to say that Rocinante is the biggest cockblocker, perfect timing indeed :D.
sarge1130 chapter 12 . 9/28/2018
I love reading their thoughts throughout ths chapter. Quite interesting how they realized that they do have feelings for each other but they have doubts and fear if they embrace it. Oh, Law speaking in German is a kind of sexy and I love it how Sanji became immediately turned on in it.
I love it how Law gives sound advices to Sanji even though I felt that it was Law who is advicing himself. Kind of funny how Law uses TV shows as a reference. What a geek! LOL.
Kind of funny how Law imagined Zoro as a green haired Super Saiyan.
I just hope that Sanji stops hoping for Zoro. Although Zoro is not coping well as he is, he is not a romantic type who believes in second chances.
sarge1130 chapter 11 . 9/28/2018
I love this chapter :). I like that it Marco is a new therapist and I think I like the way how he encouraged and praised Law for his efforts. It was kind of emotional how Law suddenly remembers his family. Never thought that the loss of his family is the main culprit but at least it was identified. One should know the main cause in order to make appropriate action. All Law has to do is to accept and move on.
I love the movie scene. It was kind of sweet how Sanji took care of Law. I love the grocery scene also. It looks so domestic and it was kind of nice how they make progress so far.
The Litte Pony scene is kind of cute. Aww, Law's parents are just so nice. I love how they supported Law in his endeavors. There's no wonder how Law felt the trauma after their death.
sarge1130 chapter 10 . 9/26/2018
This is such chapter but still, it's beautiful. I love it that this chaptet focus more on Law's struggled. Quite sad about the board's decision against him. I think they're a little unfair. I think they should help him in this situation, not left him in his own devices. Law had done his job well, they should compensate him for it.
Kind of nice how Sanji offered to help even he is still struggling. I think helping Law is like a therapy for him too. Oh, so glad that Bepo is well. Where had he been for these past weeks? Sanji's comment at the end is quite intriguing.
sarge1130 chapter 9 . 9/26/2018
This chapter is so damn emotional. I don't if it's due that this story is mainly on Sanji's POV hence we all know how Sanji felt, I also think Zoro is so damn unfair and selfish. Maybe because of treachery that had made Zoro got blinded with rage but he was only focus on his feelings. He doesn't acknowledge Sanji's past efforts on their relationship but he mainly focus on Sanji's sins against him. He was just so one-sided. Also he is unfair that he had lead the whole gang into the court as if he is claiming their friends as his. He is not only severing his relationship witn Sanji, he is trying to sever Sanji's relationship with their friends. It is like he is removing Sanji's existence.
It's a good thing that Law is there. Damn! It is like Law the Knight against Zoro's cavalry.
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