Hey chap 22 is not loading for me keeps saying chapter not found waited a few hrs and reloaded a few time nothing

That's sounds pretty cool. GTA San Andreas is my favorite of the GTA series I wish they would remake it for the ps4 or the ps5. I hope you do a story like that. But I also hope you finish this story first before you start on that one though.

It's a shame that Naruto's character has been established so well. Did the readers really need to know about Naruto's fine-tuned morality in chapter 1? It would've been better in a crime story to reveal as the story goes along, instead of simply stating everything in the first chapter. Alas, now an entire element of characterisation has been wasted.

It’s time to go back to the 90s of GTA

I think you should go with the san andreas one, it sounds like thats what you really want to work on. I probably wont read it (ive only played gtaV) but it sounds like you would enjoy working on that fic more.

Can you write a demo of it first, I would like to know how the second fic goes before fully committing to a option

Keep writing, but have it where Naruto gets away with the crime this time and lays low. Have him become legit, and not have the spoiled siblings. Narumi I liked, but Menma I don't like.

please keep writing this. don't rewrite this story

Me gusta la idea

I would like you to make your second narutoxgta, but that does not include characters narutoverse porfa

I fine with you writing another Naruto crossover gta story , but as long you keep writing this one as well, and it don’t cause you with any issues.

I think your fine as you are I see no need for a 2 nd story

Maybe a toaster chapter to see how it it is otherwise I still like this story

I think that if you had written Naruto being reborn in the De Santa family, and transmigrating to the body of Amanda and Michael's baby son and Tracey's brother you would have a bigger plot to work with. There would be a clash of culture and thoughts between Naruto and his new family that would gradually bring drama, action and adventure.

The mix between too many Naruto and GTA characters makes the story obsolete and tedious to read.

I wouldn't mind another GTA X naruto story but at the same time I would like you to keep this story going as well if that's alright but it's your choice