im glad that you acknowledge that there is no way to exaggerate Gai 3

Sad that we don't get more, but this story was enjoyable while it lasted

Eh? That was it? Nooooooooooooo! This was a very decent fic! I love it! Why?

yeah might guy would be a cool dad but like i still think lee is sercetly related to him some how but anyways i am super hooked on this and i didnt realize that i was on your last chapter til i read it and i was like NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooo
is there anyways to know how this all ends in a short summary does she go back or does she wander about or leaves the elemental country and moves to a far far island and turns it into her own paradise or is this last chapter just a silly chapter and the next chapter her parents are still alive so many questions like what if is she is still there and sasuke doesnt leave cause she is still in the leaf since he doesnt want to kill his brother how is orocchimaru going to get him to come to his sound village and the only way i could think would be maybe to kidnaps her? or am i wrong and sasuke still goes with the snake sannin even though he doesnt need too

I not sure if you intended this to be a crack fic, but I laughed my arse off. I can't tell you how many times I would read a sentence aloud only to break off into wheezing, breathless laughter. I'll admit it's not that well written, but I think that adds to the humour at times, although it also took away some as well. If you were to write something more serious, I don't think you'd have too much trouble if you simply planned out your chapters first, spell checked and focused a bit more on grammar. Extra points if you find a helpful friend or person (online or in person) to read through what you desire help with, or to make sure your story gives the correct impact you want it to have on a reader. Anyway thanks for writing this, it was fun and not too serious, made me think I was enjoying one huge meme. Have a good one!

This was fun to read, you managed to put a smile on my face, and I’m glad you decided to cap it off instead of forcing chapters out that read like shit. Good story, and hopefully you had as much fun writing as I had reading.
(omae wa mou shindeiru— The title, I misread it at first and thought it was Omae, XD)
Anyhow, have a wonderful day.

Oh my God... I can't believe this just happened... I hope Kiseki is as alright as she can be... I wonder where she'll go to train, if she'll find Itachi and Kisame or maybe someone else? I just hope that meanwhile, nothing happens between Shikamaru and Temari :/ I just think that Kiseki is not as unaffected as she portrays herself to be with people, and she needs the ones she cares about by her side... (not to mention that she seems loyal to a fault :3 )
Btw I really don't think she is a Mary Sue, they are supposed to be perfect at everything, but you've mentioned more than once that she is completely average when it comes to her looks, so there ;) jasjasjsj
Really loved this last chapter, Shisui is as amazing as always, and Kisame was a sweetheart coming to cheer her on ;)
So thanks, and i wish you good luck in your writing, since I hope to read more updates soon jsjjsjejeje :)

If you change the story now you pretty much ruin it... more than 50% of the current story is this comedy? Mary Sue ish? thing and if you do a 180 then it would just crash and burn, I hope this wasn't supposed to be a serious story... because it isn't that good, chapters are short, omakes randomly and more than one each chapter, one chapter was even half filled with omakes!? no real character development. The story feels more like a comedy skit than anything else.

The omakes are annoying... and there are far too many of them.

Seriously love this story. It made me laugh. Yes, your character is a bit all over the place and it can be a bit hard to follow but it's hard to stop reading. It isn't a story I can say makes me think but at this point in my life I kind of need it. Also, I'm so glad it is a Shikamaru story. I love him sooooo much. I think I would like to read something of your with a slightly more serious tone to it. Now, if only I could find a good Shikaku or Ensui story...

Your story always makes me laugh. I love sasuke as a fanboys, I giggle every time. Can't wait to see what happens next!

i love this book sm

First of all, this fic CERTAINLY DOESN’T SUCK. It’s not perfectly realistic, and that is fine. I appreciate the almost outlandish adventures and many love interests Kiseki has. If ever in doubt, remember this quote i saw on tumblr:
-what do you call a male mary-sue?
-the protagonist!
Love your writing and always happy to see your updates!

I keep track of the fanfiction I read by marking it under favorites so know that there is one more person reading your story. Thanks for ignoring the mean individuals review. I really wish quests couldn't review. Other authors of great stories have complained about it to. If they don't like, they don't have to read. Have a great day.

With every great story, there's always a few flames. Don't let it get to you. When I read the the flames of other stories (cause I don't write anything), they all look like they're written by a middle schooler or an idiotic young high schooler. This story is super wonderful and never fails to make me laugh! I would never give up on this story!