Just finished last chapter, very interesting take on TAG, but you got me hooked, looking forward to more updates

Cool

When will you finish it?

Joshua.

Happy Birthday! 18 is certainly a distant memory for me!
Well I wanted to see what went wrong for 'the three' and some of the answers are certainly here, beautifully tying to earlier chapters. Lucy is an enigma indeed, is her death a story of her own creation so she can take a new, more fulfiling life away from Jeff? But too leave those boys behind?! Coerced ... ? The answers to previous questions just pose more ...fantastic writing! Looking forward to the next.
Have a great time celebrating your milestone. X

Happy Birthday, Shadow! One more trip around the Sun! :) I started writing around 12 years of age, but had need making up stories for as long as I could speak.

Will you be featuring Lucy's past? How she came to turn on Jeff in this manner? Was she taking her émotions all along, or did something happen? Can't wait to find out.

Christine

Oh, dear...

Still here! And, I enjoyed this chapter, set up some interesting angles. Looking forward to seeing what went wrong for the three. X

Still looking forward to more of Lucy. :)
Short, but important chapter, setting things up.

C.

Great chapter. Love how Kayo tricked the Hood into revealing stuff. Looking forward to more.

Intriguing update. Looking forward to the Lucy reveal and Kayo's return to her brothers.

Very interesting. Can't wait to learn more.

Look forward to more of Lucy. :) Glad Kayo foiled his plan!

C.

interesting. So, Jones is out of there to get help. So there's water coming of the wall?

Joshua.

very clever

Lucy's alive? The boys will be delighted! Confused, too, but that's easily handled, once they've got Mum back. :)
Fun chapter, Shadow!

Christine