pls continue this story ! It's best story

I love your story will we ever get an update I want to see her unlock more forms

I love it so much!

please make another

feel free to put whatever you want into the story. if people don't like it they can not read it. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

its so great. please make more.

Part of me wants to be nitpicky and point out some flaws...but the other part of me is telling me to just shut up and see what happens.

The concept is okay, and that's the good thing I have to say about this story.

The spelling reeks of an auto-spell checker, the grammar and punctuation are atrocious, and the pacing is so idiotically fast it hurts my brain trying to piece the events together.

The inclusion of Naruko taking the place of Naruto, and and subsequent erasure and total replacement of her character makes her stick out like the thinly veiled mary sue she visibly is, which makes for a bland and uninteresting character, and by extension a bland and uninteresting story.

The addition of the pokemon generation 1 theme song in every chapter just makes it look like you are using cheap tactics to artificially enhance your word count to make your "story" look more attractive than it actually is.

One thing I have against this story is the opening ang ending songs... Okay, that's two things. I know you want to make it look like a long chapter by adding the intro and outro but it just gets annoying.

What an awesome plot twist can't wait for the new chapter next week

This is a great story but please stop putting that awful Pokémon thrme song on chapters

The first chapter it was fine, seeing it on every chapter after that is just annoying

Where's the update don't leave this it's lovely

Can't wait

Can't wait for the ninja training

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I am