Reviews for An Unexpected Date
He23t chapter 5 . 7/26
Now this is chapter is sizzling!

Finn and Bronwyn are really expanding their relationship to new heights as they have some fun with Tei and Lei and freaking clones! Now that is a big company. I really wish I could say more but my mind feel satisfaction as Sarutobi killed Ash in the gruesome death ever! And Marceline is getting the pleasure of a liftime of her afterlife.

Now everybody from Princess Bubblegum, Huntress, and Jungle Princess want to have that piece of action next and I hope it will happen soon.

HOT MAMA there goes that man.
lexboss chapter 5 . 7/19
I love it::)
Kingkong101 chapter 4 . 5/25
Seriously why are so many people making Adventure Time orgy stories instead of finn having a harem. So many shemales and Finn getting cuckolding. That just f up.
Fiery Crusader chapter 4 . 5/11
This sure was quite the chapter to read given the nature of things. Lemons were dished out left and right, inhibitions were released, and harems were established. Finn and Bronwyn have found themselves at the center of it all with each one having their fair share of additional partners. Although ironically enough, unless I missed it, I'm surprised Huntress wasn't the first to be with Finn after being the one who deposited the cash beforehand. At the same time however, it was neat for Finn to have his moment with Marcy. The passion and chemistry they had for each other was refreshing to say the least.

Phoebe also had her moments too. Her boldness to be with Bronwyn and Jake 3 was definitely thrilling. With the Fire Kingdom being open regarding its customs, I don't really see any reason to complain lol. In the meantime, I can only imagine how intense things will be whenever Phoebe and Finn have a chance to reconnect.

Overall great chapter, you guys never disappoint.
He23t chapter 4 . 5/6
This chapter is HOT!

Phoebe with her smoking hot orgy party along with Finn, Bronwyn, Huntress Wizard, Bonnie, Marceline, and others. It's definitely a night to remember to grand pleasure the party has to offer. First Finn and Marceline getting along passionately. Huntress and Bonnie getting there freak on!. And Phobe with Bronwyn along with Jake 3 damn they really put it on another level.

Finn getting a possible Harem in the future with Bronwyn and potential mates will be a force to be reckoned with.

A steamy chapter all the way!
lexboss chapter 4 . 5/5
Cool
Fiery Crusader chapter 3 . 9/6/2019
Bravo on the lemons, can definitely see this branching off into a great chain reaction of sorts lol. Even though Finn and Bronwyn have their conditions set, I bet it will become more difficult to maintain as Finn's past friends desire to join the action. Can they really settle for just the physical aspect of their company or would they try to go for something more? Anything's possible, but I loved the chapter.
He23t chapter 3 . 9/2/2019
Man, what an orgy.

Though surprised that Finn and Bronwyn can be that dangerous for an orgy with BP and others. There can be no wrong of how it will go down. And frankly, more princesses and some well-known characters want to get in the action soon. I can't wait for that.

Sexy chapter.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 6/3/2019
Whoever is making these you are doing an excellent job and not only is it kinky in all the right ways but it also has a overall great story line and I hope it continues.

Many thanks from the leader of "The Kink Lovers".
He23t chapter 2 . 3/14/2019
Round 2 with PB, Well this fetish is pandemic for Finn's ladies that's for sure. I mean many people witness their nudity, lusting for it, and all they do is watch from afar while the players play there on melody of pleasures.

But luckily some ladies want to join in soon, and the untold potential of creativity are...
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...limitless
Fiery Crusader chapter 2 . 3/12/2019
If only my store had a spell barrier like Elemental's Cuisine, it certainly would make my retail job much easier. Then again, that probably put loss prevention out of business so...

Anyway! It appears all that effort to erase one embarrassing video was for nothing. Not long after the fact, we learn Bronwyn's more likely to act a bit more frisky with Finn in public, which in this case happened during a movie. Bubblegum has joined the fun as a result, under the condition it is just physical-based and nothing more. Others have been inspired upon seeing the display on mainstream media, and it won't be long until Finn encounters more people to form an Inner Circle. Guess the only question that remains is if there won't be any unintentional attachments or.. outcomes that may warrant one. ;)
nightmaster000 chapter 2 . 3/11/2019
Really great to see this story continued. This second chapter was brilliantly well done with a great spicy lemon. :)
et-reader97 chapter 1 . 9/19/2018
I love this story. I'm a big fan of stories were the main charecter starts a relationship with the charecters that are under appreciated and under developed. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
nightmaster000 chapter 1 . 8/27/2018
Really awesome story and pairing. :) I think this is suppose to be a oneshot, but is there any chance of seeing more chapters in the future?
Fiery Crusader chapter 1 . 8/22/2018
Finn and Bronwyn have established a lot during their first date. First they got through the acquaintances with Kim Khil Wan and earned his approval, had a romantic steak dinner, and then took the relationship to 11. They make a good couple admittedly, I'll give them that. Good thing the lemon didn't lead to a certain outcome that would take 9 months to transpire or else KKW and Jake would have really killed Finn without hesitation. XD

You know what, I think I'll have a steak dinner myself the next time I go out. Got me craving for one already lol.
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