Interesting, really hope you're still updating this.

Second chapter I didn't review on first but I was waiting

So you decided to leave the plot as it is but make some characters get the strangeness of certain things like in case of Kayba windering about Asuna & Kirigaya and Kirigaya wondering about how he is able to walk? I think in universe explanation does not exist and it is simply the case with the power of main characters and logic bending. Unless you have come up with something like explanations? The purpose of writing I guess. Anyway somehow it was a refreshing read so thank you for that. Not sure if you are going to continue this one but I will check the two stories you mentioned.

This chapter is amazing, but I'm not seeing the second one.