Gods I love your writing! It's so detailed and well referenced. There's an amazing mix of characters and while obviously majority of them already exist (fanfiction duh) you offer them a lot more depth. I enjoy reading your take on them! Nevermind that Jasper and Maddy are ridiculously cute and now I honestly wish someone would build me a castle.
And I'm honestly not even mad that you want to deviate from canon, it makes a lot of sense with how you portray their personalities.
On a side note, your depiction of Charlie is awesome! A lot of times it's only that he is this awkward "newish" dad but it comes accross lackluster - with you however it feels like while he obviously isn't used to being a father he does want to be, so he tries, really tries
Honestly can't wait for your next update!

Ugh sooo good can't wait for more

this story abandoned?

Please continue with the story it’s really good

I like this series, i'm looking forward to reading more.

Update please

Update please

Love this story!

i hope all is well with you. I am anxiously awaiting your return to this fanfiction. I would love to see the whole twilight series rewritten in your point of view. Your version is infinitely better than the movie.

update? like now?

Are you still writing? I think you should 'cos you have great writing style. I love that and absolutely adore Maddy. Not to mention Jasper is my personal favourite character even in canon. So this was one of the most satisfying fanfictions I read. And therefore O great one accept my pleas and do continue your writing...

Is this still updating? I want to know if I have invested my time in such a great story only for it to be discontinued. Please update or at least let readers know if you are still updating.

i loooooooooooooooooooooooooove this fic i can not wait to read more ) this fic is amazing ) does maddy meet peter and charlotte? normally I know that peter, chalotte and jasper are like brothers?

a new chapter soon, please?

Brilliant, absolutely a fantastic read. Truly enjoyed it and I have loved it.
Please continue with this and complete the series. Love Madd, she is wicked sweet and spirited. Her and Jazz are so beautiful together..
I can't wait to see what happens next. Does she end up pregnant? I know you explained she had next to no hope in your last story but the dream seemed like the both of them where willing to risk everything for two people. Maybe twins? I don't I'm prob reading to much into it.
Can't wait for Maddy to meet Pete. I reckon they'll get along like crazy.
Will Alice be the new bad guy doing the whole newborn arm etc? Or will they get through to her?
Also loving papa Cullen having a backbone during the birthday scene. Actually I am loving everyones character development so far, bar B&E. They are what I envisioned when I think of the books if they where more developed and not as good at hiding there ugly traits from everyone so easily.
I'm with you on Edward and Bellas personality and immaturity are really over looked (fluffed over) in the books.
Much love and thank you for just fantastic stories to enjoy

You are an incredibly good writer. I've been reading your take on twilight for the past week and been struggling to put it down even when I had to sleep. I really hope you'll update soon, I can't wait to read what other changes you will make xx