Huh...I was wondering why the heck there were a lot of OC Kamen Riders and Super Sentai Rangers...That makes a lot of sense.

Interesting fic

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I have to say, you did an amazing job with this remake. I really enjoyed it. You keep up with the amazing work you do. Can't wait to read more from you soon.

French... location of the item missing ... I think these clue has to do with Lupinranger but I not sure I m right or not? Anyway I like how you write this Chou taisen remake especially how you put Hiiro act as he thinks his Saki similar to Saki from Go Onger hence they like sweets/cake too. Anyway I kinda suprise you put digimon adventure tri element in this story and gosh... I miss Koji Wada's song. It's very good and I glad Ami is safe with Hikari and Tail-chan who knows maybe Digimon crossover super sentai or kamen rider fanfic appear? Beside these, all of the scenes I love very much especially Poppy/Emu and Takeru /Kotoha! Kyaa!

Ok, hey bud. This was great, and this was totally worth the wait. But it was a bit long. so it required multiple sessions to sit down and read, but your taking the time to work on this is totally worth it. Aside from some almost unnoticeable typos, this story was fantastic, and I have some specific notes about events in the story, but first a couple minor corrections I feel could make it better.

For Blade, the card is “Thunder", not “Lightning"; “Lightning" is only used in his special attack names, so "Lightning Slash" and "Lightning Sonic" would be fine, but don’t call the card itself “Lightning" when it’s really “Thunder.”

I know Fraise is your Rider, but since Strawberry is already used as Ichigo, I say Pineberry would work better for her main Lockseed. Everything else works just fine.

In terms of the story, everything about it works really well. The tournament teams and pair ups work fantastically for this tale in terms of references, humor, and overall epic ness of the story.

I also liked how you poked fun at Takaharu being a stupid idiot when it comes to ninja, and even his WHOLE team pointing out how dumb he is. Even by Sentai Standards he’s an idiot ninja.

The Hero cameo was the best thing he’s been a part of so far. I like the heroes you picked to team him up with, especially the quick bit to get a shot with Den-O.

Also, Cheetahtatsumuri? A cheetah-snail?! I know that’s a real Rider monster, but even by toku standards that’s weird.

I see you used a JoJo reference with one of the characters. STAR PLATINUM! ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA! ORA!

Now in terms of improving over Yonemura, I actually think you did a much better job. You naturally have more time than he would have, but everyone is great. There’s no overwhelming of one side of heroes compared to the other, so Sentai and Riders get equal screen time, all the characters are perfectly portrayed (at least in my mind) compared to their onscreen counterparts, the dialogue feels very natural, and the references to so many other pieces of work is amazing. I even liked your inclusion of other worlds compared to the main two Toku worlds of Sentai and Riders with our Debo Kyoryuger cameos, the aforementioned KR Hero cameo, your ships for the various heroes including officially having Takeru marry Kotoha for your Shinkenger Next Gen tale, the Gouraigers being focus instead of Hurricanger to the point Tentoraiger is real, the manga-exclusive Green Eagle Jetman, and so much more.

Now this is spoiler turf for anyone who hasn’t read this far, so don’t read what I have next unless you already read the story.

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The story’s conclusion is fantastic with how it acknowledges the worlds coming apart, but every hero ending things on good terms.

The acknowledgement of Digimon Tri with Luka’s and Raptor’s actress’ role as Hikari/Kari and Tailmon/Gatomon was very nice.

The splitting up of the Go-Ongers and Engines again was sad but sweet.

The official birth of Hana with Yuto and Airi as her parents and the Taros reuniting with Ryotaro proper was perfect, and I can easily see Takeru Satou coming back for this role for at least one final time before going back to being big.

The Magiranger hints of Houka crushing on Haruto was cute, and the traveling trio of Eiji, Gou, and Haruto was kinda funny, too, as well as the hinting of what may happen with Chase’s Signal Bike.

While I’m not a fan of Dino Force Brave/Kyoryuger Brave, it was nice to get the acknowledgement in this story as well as showing Amy at the end with the Rapax Dinocell/

Tsukasa noticing KR Hero and trying to figure out who he is is cool, but I’m curious how this will proceed.

Plus, neat callback to the Kyuurangers’ cameo debut during Zyuohger, and I think it’s very cool. And nice with how Tsukasa appears to explain how the nine showed up there.

And this finally explains where Hero went in the middle of his own story.

Poor Debo-Kyoryuger Yayoi, she worked really hard for having not known of the other dimensions prior to the story. She must be exhausted.

Cute how Kouta and Mai are back on their new home as Kami-sama-tachi, and Mai is exploring her new Rider powers.

Kotoha and Takeru are a cute couple and I want to see more of them in other stories.

What’s with the Taddle Legacy Gashat wielder in the prison on the Kamen Rider world? I’m a bit confused as to what that means.

Yamato and Amu are best Zyuohger ship, it’s so adorbs!

Where’s Gemn off to this time? If he’s going through the mist, that can’t be good.

And the Goriders officially became the defenders of their own world, even if it was a game, all looking like the members of Team Ex-Aid. Nice to know they had another chance at life in a way. And there’s another tournament going on? And there is a group of cop-based heroes alongside a team of train-themed characters? What? Are they data duplicates, or is this just something random? Or maybe this is a new take on Ganbarizing. Who knows.

Again, nice to see Tsukasa being the one to help bring the Kyuurangers back home despite the hiccup earlier as ZyuohBird noted them leave.

What was with the person with the red and green dual Gashat/double-sided Gashat?

And the ending is so cute, seeing Emu and Asuna together like that. And all this to the tune of Butterfly by the late Kouji Wada is incredible. In fact, all the musical inserts are very well placed and timed out. I’m looking for more stories in the future, including what could be continuations of what cliffhangers are given in this story.

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Now for the previews. Go-Onger 10 Years later, Heroic Tales: Kamen Rider Marth. Both sound like really awesome tales. Plus, all the Riders to appear and help out (aside from Den-O being Momotaros and NOT Ryoutaro for so far unexplained reasons), Kotaro (spelt without the H) being two Riders in one, the Gaim/Fraise duo having an influence there, and others is just awesome. And even Cross-Z shows up to help! Oh, and there’s Build, too. He’s ok, I guess.

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And lastly, the clues for whatever the heck you’re talking about. Let me see if I can crack this mystery. Again, if you don’t want to know unless Pika reveals it guys, ignore what I’m about to type.

Let’s see… the location of the item that caused the mess (and by extension the item itself I assume) are missing. So the clues. There’s the code 2-1-1… voleur being a term for thief in french… True Brave’s nonsense of not looking for answers, the Proto Gashats, and something about the Next Genome institute… all I can figure out is that it has something to do with the Lupinrangers… otherwise, total mystery.

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Ok, just like your long time in writing this story, I feel this is a good point to stop my review. This story was great, and I’m looking to so much more out of you, buddy. Don’t strain yourself making another story this long, but I am excited for what’s to come. Until next time, bud, keep up the great work.

*Salutes* Jaa ne.

Great story