Reviews for The Burned Ones |
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PanzerVor621 chapter 14 . 6/12 will this be continued ? im really hoping you will. |
myklandrei501 chapter 14 . 3/22 may I ask if this story is now canceled? |
RememberYourDeath1347 chapter 14 . 2/10 Hope this continues. |
Spectre118 chapter 14 . 6/11/2019 The turret could not be removed by hand once it was on only the whole tank exploding or a direct hit to the turret would nock it off Only the turrets on battleships like bismarck or tirpitz were held in by gravity |
CommanderMaverick chapter 14 . 5/22/2019 Damn, only Alex Mercer will be able to tear that turret off. |
Guest chapter 13 . 4/2/2019 Awesome chapter! Great to see you back! I was going to PM you and see what you were up to, looks like you beat me to it. |
CommanderMaverick chapter 13 . 1/22/2019 Imagine if the tank crew had Leopard 2A8, M1A2 Abrams or Merkava Mk V. (If the story was slightly different). Nothing would be able to capture it, scratch it or even STOP it. I really enjoyed this story. My blood pressure is rising from enemy in this story, that's how good it is. Take your time, you don't need to rush. The bigger pressure you put on yourself, the worse the writing will get. |
Guest chapter 13 . 1/17/2019 que chismoso deberían ponerle un pegamento para que no se meta metiche |
PanzerVor621 chapter 12 . 1/8/2019 It’s not dead is it |
PanzerVor621 chapter 11 . 11/15/2018 Please let us know if your still working on it or if u need ideas |
Eris chapter 10 . 10/26/2018 That’s such an interesting chapter. So crazy things happen in the story. Please update soon. |
PanzerVor621 chapter 9 . 10/19/2018 Hey it’s not dead is it? |
SpookOrSpectre chapter 9 . 10/5/2018 Good chapter again. I think the dialogue is definitely getting better but the characters dialect and word choice doesn't quite fit them sometimes. They often seem southern. Also, some strange phrases that look good on paper but you wouldn't say in real life. Otherwise it looks great. |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/27/2018 Seems rather unlikely that they would just instantly believe that he's a demigod after he performs what amounts to a cool magic trick. Honestly it's kind of jarring. |
Ace Sinclair chapter 7 . 9/23/2018 It's a strange and interesting concept, Nazi zombies appearing in Zootopia, I'll give you that. However, the more "supernatural" elements are messing with my suspension of disbelief, maybe it's just me, who knows, but I am curious to see how this plays out. Maybe Hitler will be the final boss. |