Rens semblance isn’t invisibility, it’s tranquility, he masks all emotions so Grimm can’t sense you

You say ‘that incident’ talking about arkados, but the girls don’t really know what happened, so why exactly is he freaking out about telling them so much? They don’t know it wasn’t an accident or that he did it

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It's k.

well there goes my Healthcare

A lot of fucking inconsistent on his skills he's post to be one of the most lethal Spartan of all but nope he can't ever beat team crdl thought being hit and I fucking know it's to move the plot along not really original

did I notice a RvB reference

Apathetic or not, this chapter still turned out well.

Oliver ain't playing hard to get. He IS hard to get.

This fanfiction is a clusterfuck.

Like literally a cluster fuck.

it laughable when she say the whole world would burn down around him for matter of fact his world was burned along time ago it just how long would sh have that ridiculous thinking process when the covenant come to their world and burn her world her "Maiden magic" shit can't stop a glassing beam destroying her world. sure she could go on killing Covenant soldiers but it delaying the inevitable doesn't matter if she has an Army of Grimm to back her up, a glassing beam all it takes to kill and Ant and I sure as hell know that Remnant don't have anything to reach outer space nor the weapons to fight in it cause dust can only be useful on Remnant

I think is an interesting story hope to see more soon.

Ooc for a spartan.

I’m back, chapter was good, but I do have some minor criticisms. The Atlesian squad of troopers felt rather unneeded, and it didn’t seem like they did much, if the idea was to introduce them for something later on, I would suggest giving them a bit more “screentime” as well as something to do, even if it’s just talking to Ollie.

The other thing is that Cinder seems a bit... forthcoming with information, while I’m sure that you have your reasons I can say I understand at the moment. It could be possible that my crappy memory combined with the fact i haven’t touched in like a month means I may have forgotten some plotpoints.

great chapter, can't wait for the next chapter but I was wondering if Ollie's tried having his aura unlocked cause it hasn't been confirmed if he is capable of having one or not